I'm not a chosenshipper but the world needs more manga Originalshipping ;_;
How many times have I read the RedxGreen part? Oh yeah...20 times or so!

AHHHH! I'm dying from the awesomness!

i loved it

Manga verse Blue/Green(male)xRed is called

Namelesshipping. Game verse, it is called

Originalshipping.

Ohhh, Green and Red are in a secret relationship. (;

I probably should have been paying more attention to Blue and Silver's relationship, but my favorite part about this was most definitely when Red was tending Green's bruise...

I really liked this. Green was exceptionally mean, Red was plain awesome, Blue was all worried about hurting Silver, and Silver was all protective.

Very nice job!

* insert random applause *

Aw, that was so cute, especially the ending. 3

Awesome fic, I could picture everything in my head, which is good 8D

Hope you can write another SilverxBlue fic

I loved it:D very well written

I didnt read the story for those of us who dont read magna Red is Ash Blue is Gary and Green is a GIRL!

If she's a bitch, then Green's an asshole.

Seriously? He NEVER figured she might not thought he was with Red (or at least somebody else)? AUGH. SOOO MUCH easier to solve other people's problems! *hits head on table*

Anyway- this is an excellent fic. :) Really dramatic, angsty, etc. Of course, I'm a Silver/Gold fan myself, but whatevz. So... yup! It's late. Better get to bed. Keep it up _

wow, this is so awesome! LOVED it! totallyz! make more plz! :DD

Aw, how does this story turn from sad to adorable so fast? There are so many little things I like about it. Red really acts as a foil for Green here, I almost get the feeling that Green is letting himself get angrier than he normally would because he knows Red will drag him back when he steps out of line. And they are especially adorable when green is uncertain about revealing it and Red is being comforting. Though for some reason I picture Green, minimalistic and efficient person that he is, as only having two glasses,(one for him and one for Red x3) and now he's broken one of them. And Red will insist on dragging him out shopping and buy a whole set of hideous brightly colored glasses that he will be forced to use because why should he buy more glasses when he already bought these? Also I like how you show Silver being comforting not through words, but through gestures. He doesn't make any long romantic speeches, he just bluntly says what he has to say, which is really in character for him. One of the things I found really interesting was Blue's speech at the end, about how she didn't want to ruin Silver. The fact that she was going after Green instead of Red in the first place seems odd, given that Red has shown some interest in her past and he's a lot more cheerful and easygoing than Green. But Red is also a lot more idealistic and good than Green, the proverbial hero and anti-hero as it were. So maybe Blue didn't want to ruin Red either, but she saw Green as someone who'd already had that happen to him? So she kept doggedly going after him because she didn't think he could be corrupted by her. Anyway, I hope you'll forgive my rambling musing about your story, it was wonderful! Silver and Blue have such a cute sad dynamic together, and of course Red and Green are as fun as always. I'm looking forward to the next chapter of Corrupted too, but this little interlude made me very happy to see.

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I loved the ending. I really, really loved the ending, and I could totally see that happening. Like the whole kiss on the forehead and then the actual kiss, omg. Very good job.

The site is totally lacking in the SilverxBlue department and I'm trying to help it out myself (I've written three so far xD) and I'm glad to see someone else writing it too!

Looking forward to more fics if you decide to do more on them.