Nicely done, nicely done indeed! I love this pairing. I love HoneySyn in general actually... Hm, trying to think of any criticism. I thought your pronouns were a little odd in places - "the shorter boy" notably. Maybe you were going for more variation, but I don't think it was really necessary. Anyway, I loved your style, it fit with the original story really well! Write more? ;D

Great story, I really like your writing style (cue raid of your fics), also I now want to be able to see a graveyard during "fall" (I say it like that because where I'm from leaves don't usually fall during Autumn, since most trees are evergreens).

Awwwww... It was so sweet! Love 'em fluffies! The description was awesome too! Nice work!

I really did wish the fandom was a larger one. I keep coming back to it when I'm feeling nostalgic. :P

This was a lovely little gem of a fic. Thank you for writing it!

adorable and dorky :D

Sweet and fluffy to the point where we can start making cotton candy! XD

Ha ha, anyways... awesome J/M fic! I really loved the fall setting and the cemetery-ness. I always wanted to try doing that but...

Yay, for fanfics! I can just imagine Josh and Metis walking through graveyards making lame jokes and disturbing the dead instead! So great job! :D

~~ 5 hearts!

Wow, this was beautiful!

I could picture this all happening in my head, SOCUTE3

you've really pinned down metis as someone loving fall here, really well done, and i loved how you wrote josh as well

all those cute little things mentioned in passing i found adorable - like josh having the urges to kiss metis in innapropriate places like in class and at the dining table with his parents there, i laughed out loud

An adorable story, really well done!

Very sweet and cute. Well written too.

I thought the cemetery was weird at first but you definately made it work. Awesome job. 3

Not enough Metis/Josh love out there.