You did a great job of fitting your lore into the universe, from what I remember :) The characters seem pretty close to behaving according to canon except some angst from Hermione, which we will forgive her for for being in love. Her and Lucius were terrible at communicating at times, but I know that is the whole point of the story lol! There wouldn't be much of a premise if they communicated the secret from the beginning lol. :) I am sure they learned lots from this episode and cemented their marriage on a nice bedrock of open and honest communication. LOL!

This was fun to read - Matchmaking the Past I am even more looking forward to as that was one of my favorites of all time. Glad you finished this up! Like I said it's inspiring - I'll have to get mine done too someday, haha. Cheers! :)

absolutely awesomely amazing story. Thank you so much for this. Brought tears to my eyes in parts and I was feeling all sorts of emotions throughout. Loved it.

Yay à happy end and I somehow knew when you mentioned her (morning) sickness that she is pregnant. They at least married but I really want to know what punishment Cormac got for what he did.*chocolates for inspiration and the great work*

Loved it!

Lovely!️

Nice twelve chapters

I would say you are writing very well for being "rusty" doing it. Good chapter so he killed them but Dolohov tortured them it may have been a mercy then. So we are set on Cormac then? Why not it doesn't matter in the end only that Lucius forgives himself tells Hermione the truth she already Knows and beg for forgiveness for acting like and dunderhead. Don't let him do something stupid Hermione may not forgive I want a happy end please. *chocolates for inspiration and the great work*

Oh god damnit of course she knew the one thing Lucius couldn't talk or admit and atone for and she already knew it, but somehow it is Hermione and I think I knew she knew what he is hiding and why he is doing what he is doing, if he would have talked to her than he wouldn't be in this dilemma right now. But we still don't know who it is I doubt Cormac was there or had seen it so we can rule him out he is just a creep and an jerk. Really good chapter more please *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

Andromeda knows something is fishy and want's answers. Harry thought it better that they are more seen in public and that she stays there as well. Cormac is still a creep and Draco shows he is a good friend who doesn't want any part of the crazy scheme his father and Hermiones friends are doing right now they may do it for Hermione but they are wizards and she can defend herself up until now the blackmailer only threatened Lucius and never said he would hurt Hermione physically I think. More please *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

More past is revealed. Draco at least found someone and Is worried for Hermione's well-being and angry at his father and her friends for keeping such a big thing from her. Lucius should have told her sooner what's going on, she may would have been angry feelt betrayed but in the end she would have forgiven him but Ivm not sure if she can now after all. More please *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

It is at least not Ron but who, oddly I'm onto Cormac McLaggen now I think we need more info on who is married in your story then we can circle them out. Hermione let drop that she may know the thing Lucius is hiding from her to Andromeda and only wants it confirmed from her. Really good chapter more please that would be great *chocolates for inspiration and the great work*

Good chapter, Painted Narcissa is right Lucius you should tell her the aftermath wouldn't be to your liking man;), Hermione really should be a Detektive with these deductive skills of her to find out the truth. More please that would be great *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

Interesting story dramatic and exciting too I like the past and present thing. But who is it really that does all these things my crazy assumption is Ron to be honest in some kind of disguise to swoop in and win Hermione back or something like that. More please that would be great *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

I knew it from the beginning it was him who did it. I think he should tell her and beg for forgiveness.
Please please update this! It's one of the best Lumione stories I've read!

Ack! Please write more! I love it! XXX