Good.

So good! Great job with first person!

omg, the collie was impervious to the reid effect!

""I think I'll do a paper on this. It would probably be a useful addendum to the BAU training curriculum.""

You made my day. I love you right now.

"Time passes slowly. I feel Hotch turn one way, then the other. The ground is hard and cold, and there's a rock pressing into my ribs. I wonder if I should give up and try to talk. I want to tell him that I'm sorry, really sorry, about Haley, but that he's right, it is for the best, I've been seeing it coming for a long time, and I think that he's going to come through this just fine.

And, I want to tell him that, yes, I'm gay, but I don't know what that means exactly, because I've spent so much time not thinking about it, that I don't even know how to think about it, and I'm scared, Hotch, I'm really scared, because a lot of things have happened to me, mostly because of this job, but it's really all I've got, and I don't know who I am anymore."

That..made me want to cry...oh my gosh...

"I wonder if he's already sorry.

I feel him shift and then, he slips his arm around my waist and pulls me close. A few seconds later, he's breathing slowly and evenly, and it feels so good to be held, to have his heart beating inches away from mine. I close my eyes and smile. I'm warm, sated, and I nestle back into him, asleep before I know it."

Okay, now I did cry. You're amazing.

"...I haven't had a second to process the loss of my virginity with a man, nor the fact that that man was my boss, with whom I've been hopelessly and pathetically in love for quite a while now."

Chest/Heart clenchs...

I love you. The last two scenes were the best. Oh my gosh - I love you - you're amazing. You did a great job telling this from Reid's P.O.V, it felt so real that I almost forgot that writing this was a challenge for you, I felt so in with the character...it was great. I could feel the emotion, the love, the feelings...the vagueness was perfection. It was just great. You're great - amazing. This was just...wow.

the ending 3 love it :)

Interesting story, thanks for writing :)

Reid knows. Because Hotch let him drive. Ya know, sometimes it really IS the little things that are so very telling.

Impressed with agressive virgin!Reid, making the first move and 'seducing' Hotch. Then being a bossy bottom, expecting a soft bed, warmth, a shower and some lube the next time they get it on. Sheish. Demanding all that comfort. Hotch is obligated, at the very least, to fu*k him again with all the comforts this time.

Yay Glam Rock..

Cute story. It definitely suits the first-person perspective you used. We don't really need more information than what we get from Reid.

I liked the fact that Reid knows he and Hotch will be ok, because Hotch let him drive. And he fell asleep with Reid driving.

I could so enjoy reading a bit of them in a soft bed with personal lubricant, just so you know.

I liked this. I liked Brokeback Mountain, too. Thank Gawd Hotch isn't like Enis and determined to deny himself...that broke my heart.

Good job. _ Loved the ending.

lovely

Man, that was moving... It almost seems like a its open for a continuation:)

love it!

Wow, that was awesome. I know you said you don't usually do first-person narration, but I think you did a fantastic job. I could really hear Reid in my head, telling me this story. Good job!

loved it amazing & sweet