This is a nice idea, but I feel like there should have been more installments.

AWEWSOME

I love your way with the Tony angst. It has me in knots. But I like it. xo

Nice job!

Hi, nice back and forth between Tony and Gibbs. Tactile Gibbs is nice.
Somehow this story doesn't feel like it is over though ;)
Thanks and cheers!

Enjoyed the byplay and character voice - could very easily visualize the characters on screen, as well as clearly hear the pace and timing of their back and forth. Though it's been a while since I've watched this show, stories like these remind me of the magic rhythm these characters can have with each other when written well. Good choice on the layout of the story also - letting the past and present unfold without having to delve into exposition, rather just allowing the visual images build to let the story come to fruition. Nice.

Not a sequel here, but damn good anyway.

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Classic line: you were a marine, the people who wanted you dead are dead, I was a cop all the people who want me dead are getting out on parole, love it.

Wow! Great little fic! Ah-Maz-Ing! :-D

I really like this, especially your little bits of interjected info. Will there be more?

Just wanted to say I love this story.

A thoroughly nifty story.

Thanks for the update with such a powerful chapter! I loved the dialogue between Tony and Gibbs, and how Gibbs made sure to feel Tony's pulse. Wonderfully written!

I like the gut comment. I have to agree with Tony, I would have to stop confusing my stomach with spicy foods

Gibs would have a nice safe place to hang at :)