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Great Chapter. Well done.

Chapters like this make me appreciate your newer stories even more. Very happy I don't come across these anymore.

I wish the part where Alice and her sister arrived at the Cullen house. My favorite part of these stories is when the person in the dark is put into a place where 'odd' things Cynthia's reaction to the Cullens would be sweet to see.

I was having so much fun but the last 3 lines of this chapter ruined everything! I had to quit reading because it angered me so much. After watching a bit of youtube I'm back and ready to push forward with the upcoming disaster. :)

I don't know if leaving a review on a 9-5 years old story means anything but I have to say this story is freaking awesome! Just so so so good! It is a joy to read so far.

Great story. I loved it, but there is one truely killer flaw. And in all fairness, creating a story without one is ridiculously hard, especially when you are not professional, so I'm not hating on you, but not giving a firm death for the Thornes was rather underwhelming. You fleshed them out too much for it to be reasonable to not kill them off, or at least give them a conclusion of some kind. The rest of the story is really good though so props for that.

Hello :D
First of all I have to say: This story was awesome! :D The idee, that bella is the vampire and Alice the human was very interesting, well done! 3
This story was the first which I have read of yours (hope that's the right grammar... I'm from german and my english is absolutly terrible x'D) Right now I am reading Blod Solstice. Broken Aurora was the first because I liked the name more :P I love your writing style... I have read the story in a week (which is fast for me, cause my english is so bad :P) My mother has sad I am a little addicted because I done nothing else these days :D So I want to say thank you very much for sharing your story! I hope, that one day I will have an Alert which says you wrote a new story :D (I loved the length of the story and the chapters) 3 thanks :-* NaturElfe

I liked the story up until this point, but this type of twist is boring and old in my opinion, and completely ruined the story vy being incredibly unrealistic just to be able to continue a conflict. A shame, given the rest of the story was so great.

Y'know, despite you telling me it would probably be very bad and poor writing and whatnot, I actually liked this story. It was really great and it had pretty much everything I wanted in a story like this: Action, Romance, Drama. You know the likes. It was a really great story so don't beat yourself up over how you think it isn't good.

This is a pretty good story so far. And Bella kissing her sisters is sweet as well, but I'm not so sure about the kisses between Bella and Esme. I mean, they're practically mother and daughter and it's fine and comforting if you had done them just pecking each other at the corners of their mouths, which is what my mum and I do normally. Don't get me wrong, I love the story so far.

Okayyy, I'm still halfway through but I have to stop. I can't force myself to read anymore. The story is filled with inconsistencies, you write one thing and then state another, everything is one cluttered mess, it's painful to read. It seems as if I also hate the internal monologues and the cringey filler details that adds no value other than drag the story out. This is not bad but it isn't that good either. And I expected a lot from this because this is one of the top Bellice stories out there.

Awesome story

yikes. how can amara talk about how ppl should accept what women do with their bodies and then say that fat ppl should cover themselves? double yikes

Thank you for the hard work and effort!