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love all the greek mythology references seriously amazing x

This was lovely as well. Your knowledge of mythology is impressive and you weave it into the story effortlessly. Wonderfully imaginative story. Great Job!

I loved in this story how it depends so much on the Greek myths of the Iliad, and the Odysseus. How it uses those character's from Homer's piece to show depths to Arthur and Ariadne that we don't normally think about in Inception.

I loved how he returns to her, and how she waits for him. But I liked how you showed that they have lives outside of each other but don't seem to live until their together.

Thank you for the wonderful story.

This was the first A/A story I ever read, and it's the one that sucked me into the Inception fandom and forever branded me an A/A shipper. It's lovely and haunting and so, so beautiful, and the mythological references were absolutely perfect and made me squee with nerdiness at recognizing them, so who cares if they're unsubtle? They're wonderfully used, and this story is beautifully written, so thank you, thank you, thank you.

I love the way seamlessly entwined Inception with Mythology, I've always had a fascination with it. The story itself was enthralling in its own right as well, quite original and it seemed so lyrical. I felt there was a slightly desperate edge to it and I adored their reunion, "There will be time for talking on the other side of sunrise." I loved that line.

Fantastic story and very well writen!

Wonderful story! I love the comparisons between Greek myth - it made the story so much richer and fascinating. Excellent job!

This was very well-written. I kinda of loved it. Arthur is my favorite character.

Beautiful.

lovely! great use of other mythology references to illuminate aspects of the characters. and the idea that a secret can itself serve as a totem is such a fantastic point! the image of ariadne as a stronger willed penelope and the idea that arthur would naturally identify best with wily stubborn odysseus is just superb. i love your handle on these characters and the quiet steady strength they draw from each other!

You write amazingly well. I loved it! Will definitely go and read some more - Ashabagawa

Oh *lovely*! This was great, and very thoughtful. I enjoyed this very much, but then I was shipping Ariadne/Arthur throughout the movie both the first and second time I watched it in theatre. I'll probably ship it again once it's on DVD and I get to see it as many times as I like. :-D

Great job with the lyrical feeling of this fanfiction too.

Pretty much poetry.

I LOVE how you share my idea of incorporating Greek mythology into Inception! It's just so perfect, since Limbo is always waiting there to drag people under. It's just like the Odyssey!

Great, deep story!

Wow. I think this is perfect, I love it so much. I'm Italian and I studied in a liceo classico, which is like a high school where the main subjects are Latin and Ancient Greek so Homer and all the mythology merry band were my companions for five years. And to find them in this story, linked to a movie I loved in a way that's so fitting is simply amazing.

So yeah.

*now goin to read all your other stories*

There is something very unique in this. I like how you didn't just stay with the popular greek heros but also had them relate to other different ones.