Reviews for What if the phone didn't ring? |
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hannahchan92 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011 Ohhhh man I've always daydreamed about if the call had never come in. :D It's cool to read somebody else's idea of what would've happened. I like that you made Simon a gentleman. I like it. :) good job. |
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 1 . 7/31/2011 This is an excellent oneshot, as well as a great scene of what could've happened had Lorraine not called at that point in time. :) I also like the book The Silver Kiss, because it's a great book to read and be inspired by as well. "I'll find you again.." he sat at the far end of her couch, readjusting his t-shirt and putting his jacket back on. "and when you do.." she asked eagerly, sheepishly almost and he didn't dare look her in the eye. His lips curled into a grin and he bit his lip. "I'll take you like a lady." He paused to see if she were revolted but she only readjusted her own self, her heart raced once again and he kissed her hand goodbye. Very intriguing and creative! :) Keep up your super-neat, very brilliant and creative writing! :) |
BlackDove13 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010 Just wanted to say i loved the story. The Silver Kiss is one of my faves and I also had a lot of what if's about the book. :D |
GreenEyedGleek chapter 1 . 10/9/2010 possible rate change? then make it a sequeal? btw, did it ever say if Siman was a virgan? because if he is he like a 300 year old virgan. |