I Hope I translate in french. and so I like it

Honestly, when I saw the first part of the summery and the fanfiction title I though, oh no not Twilight! Then I saw it was a twilight-bashing so I read it, and it was brilliant!

For your first fic, it was pretty good! You had a nice plot line. The one thing I would suggest is showing not telling. Instead of saying "Draco liked to show off", show us he does. Write a small scene or something that shows us he likes to show off. But, thats a skill that few have mastered, and I think you did very well! The edward stuff made me laugh!

Twilight bashing is so much fun! This was a cute little story :D

Oh Twilight. How I despise you! lol. This was cute and funny. Light bashing too made it perfect.

HAHA, I hate Twilight too. This was super funny, and I was shaking with laughter by the end. Though that might have something too do with me trying to create my own theme music.

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This is really should write more like it.

lol, its funny nd cute. ugh, im anti twilight also.

HAHAHAHA!

I love your story. I don't like Twilight either... so, this fic is like a dream come true! XD You should make more. x3 Like, drabbles. That would be A-W-E-S-O-M-E.

Aww it was cute! do u like twilight?

:D :D ROFL :D that was really funny :D

Hehe I have to admit that this made me giggle. Silly and cute 3 ...plus Twilight bashing IS fun.