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Jj chapter 8 . 12/5/2016 No pls Continue who new and angry frie bender and a monk who does some very unmonkly things get to get her live it |
rebelturtle9-1-3 chapter 8 . 11/1/2016 Update! Please! I love this, so much! |
Elven Silver Power Ranger chapter 8 . 10/8/2013 This is by far the best! Fan fiction I have read in a long, long, long, long time! You have an awesome writing ability! The only criticism I have for it is that it’s not done! so if you have some spare time please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, update soon! thank you |
Bluetips chapter 8 . 8/18/2013 Please continue and update soon! -Bluetips |
HornsAndHalos717 chapter 7 . 7/10/2013 No offence, but she is probably the worst sister ever! The writing in this story is great, but Natsumis part in the plot of the story doesent change much of the original plot. I feel like you could do more to enhance natsumis sisterly role. I don't mean to be... Well... Mean, but speaking as an older sister I believe that she would be a bit more protective over Aang. I mean, she practically shows no reactions to him being in danger constantly. All in all, this is generally good writing, but with a character who only has a minor part in the story, and is not very... Hmmm... Good at showing emotions. The only thing she has shown is "Love" for a boy who she has known less than 3 weeks... I am not saying that you should change her character, I just can't quite accept ...ehem... The characters character... If that makes any sense. Sincerely, -Rockets521 |
Taeniaea chapter 8 . 6/7/2011 cool chapter |
Cheertastic978 chapter 8 . 4/28/2011 LOVE THE STORY SO FAR PLEASE UPDATE SOON :) |
Shortyred chapter 8 . 4/3/2011 Luv it luv it luv it make more plz |
NadaZero chapter 1 . 3/21/2011 exciting. |
NadaZero chapter 2 . 3/21/2011 nice. |
NadaZero chapter 3 . 3/21/2011 fantastic. |
NadaZero chapter 4 . 3/21/2011 amusing. |
NadaZero chapter 5 . 3/21/2011 excellent. |
NadaZero chapter 6 . 3/21/2011 wicked. |
NadaZero chapter 7 . 3/21/2011 cool. |