Reviews for You Shouldn't Be Alone
Jj chapter 8 . 12/5/2016
No pls Continue who new and angry frie bender and a monk who does some very unmonkly things get to get her live it
rebelturtle9-1-3 chapter 8 . 11/1/2016
Update! Please! I love this, so much!
Elven Silver Power Ranger chapter 8 . 10/8/2013
This is by far the best! Fan fiction I have read in a long, long, long, long time! You have an awesome writing ability! The only criticism I have for it is that it’s not done! so if you have some spare time please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, update soon! thank you
Bluetips chapter 8 . 8/18/2013
Please continue and update soon!

-Bluetips
HornsAndHalos717 chapter 7 . 7/10/2013
No offence, but she is probably the worst sister ever!
The writing in this story is great, but Natsumis part in the plot of the story doesent change much of the original plot. I feel like you could do more to enhance natsumis sisterly role. I don't mean to be... Well... Mean, but speaking as an older sister I believe that she would be a bit more protective over Aang. I mean, she practically shows no reactions to him being in danger constantly.
All in all, this is generally good writing, but with a character who only has a minor part in the story, and is not very... Hmmm... Good at showing emotions. The only thing she has shown is "Love" for a boy who she has known less than 3 weeks...

I am not saying that you should change her character, I just can't quite accept ...ehem... The characters character... If that makes any sense.

Sincerely,
-Rockets521
Taeniaea chapter 8 . 6/7/2011
cool chapter
Cheertastic978 chapter 8 . 4/28/2011
LOVE THE STORY SO FAR PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)
Shortyred chapter 8 . 4/3/2011
Luv it luv it luv it make more plz
NadaZero chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
exciting.
NadaZero chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
nice.
NadaZero chapter 3 . 3/21/2011
fantastic.
NadaZero chapter 4 . 3/21/2011
amusing.
NadaZero chapter 5 . 3/21/2011
excellent.
NadaZero chapter 6 . 3/21/2011
wicked.
NadaZero chapter 7 . 3/21/2011
cool.
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