Amazing

awww!this was like way to cute w so happy for Cloud,he got Squall's second virgin kiss!wait;not a virgin kiss anymore -' but maybe he can un-virgin Squall omg! XD this is like somethig i've once readed!how did it go again...something like this:

"You can't have everything,Ikuto!"

"You think?Amu,i have something that no one has..."

"What?"

"Your viginity!"

oh pwned!but it was a fanfic,too but i can so imagine Cloud saying that

mooorrree! more please! :PP

Hey...that was rather sweet, the ending. :)

That was epic.

Despite the lack of sex scene, this fic is still so hot.

Plus, it's just ADORABLE. Haha. Adorable Cleon. So cute.

Good job with this.

xxtwentysix

Aw the ending 3

too cute. too. cute.

Eeeeepppppp, Love It

Okay, wow, are you sure you shouldn't of just slapped 'OC' on the characters in here? Because it certainly would have felt more correct than your actual story did. Thank you so much for raping the characters personalities just to make them act as you wished. You accomplished your task rather thoroughly.

cute story. thanks for sharing!