Reviews for Time to Pretend
Yu chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
really liked this as well! i quite enjoy reading the products of your mind, they are very entertaining!
Lady Almatari chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
*gigglesnort* I loved the last little bit. It's so like Yusuke to brush past uncomfortable topics with humor. I think Hiei's feels were very well conveyed as well. His admiration for Yusuke is an excellent base for anything more.
NyteKit chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
So I was going to wait until I finished reading the entire series to review, but this one was just too hilarious to wait. Yusuke and Hiei's handling of Kurama is just the funnies thing in the world. I think you would (will? have?) write them well as a threesome. Snarky Kurama is the best Kurama. And I just love when the other two shut him up. ;)
Rogue Lumiere Declair chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
I love it!
BeyondMyReach chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
I love how your stories are always bit sweet, bit bitter

The ending's very cute too
Anime Princess chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
LOL

The last sentence was so like those 3!

Love it!

And I wonder IF Keiko realizes and that's part of the tension between them 'subconsciously'.
Aachi chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
can't wait to read more of this story arc! :D
BlueUtopiah chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
I'm such a stalker, all these reviews. But stalking only means somebody cares. :D :D :D

The quick Hiei-Kurama scene where Hiei eats the chicken and pushes Kurama up against the wall was ajhslajlas hot.

And ahhhhh Yusuke, never change. Who's going to be on top is the least of your worries.
sesshy's numba1 gurl chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
I liked it alot great job! And nice ending lol
KyoHana chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
It figures that Yusuke's first thought regarding the threesome would be who's on top... not only that but nominating himself... so typically Yusuke!

And once again, you've perfectly captured your characters, infusing humor just where it was needed to keep this from becoming a complete study in angst! Well done, as always.
kit-kit chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
lls..that is a very important question that i would luv to find out the answer to...who will be on top..i vote hiei...sorry i just luv a uke yusuke.
gothvoid chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
x3 Aw, poor Yusuke. Hiei and Kurama will fix you up right. xD

Keiko's bitchy. :P
CCILoveSparklesCC chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
This is awesome! Of course Yusuke's main concern would be sex. xD Hope you'll update soon!

Sincerely,

Jen
raineynight chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Yay! . This is amazing, and I hope that you write more soon! :)