Oh god spiders, I’m eating and there goes my appetite lmao

I like this story, however I suggest some serious edits:
1. Balmoral Castle is in Scotland.
2. If Harry is 11 the year is '91 Prince William was 10, Harry was 7.
3. Daina and Charles separated in '92.
4. The Royal Residence of the Queen is Buckingham Palace, London.
5. Windsor Castle, Windsor England is outside London near Eton and most likely the castle your explaining as the Queen spends most of her time there, besides Balmoral.
6. Camilla Parker-Bowls was still married to her now ex- husband in '91 and divorced him in '95. She married Charles 10 years later at Windsor Guildhall, then becoming the Dutchess of Cornwall. Her full title is her Highness the Princess of Wales, she does not use it out of respect to Diana and the Queen.
7. Diana was the fashionista. Camilla is a frugal shopper.
8. Out of deference to the age of the Prince's they were hardly subjected to Tabloid reporters while they were school age, and a level respect was held for their age where they were not mobbed and hounded like they are now.

Like I said, I like this story. It has an interesting view to everything.

Well that sucked

"Super", eh? If this kid turns out to be of Kryptonian or Daxamite origin, I'm gonna put this story down and take out a subscription to "Superman" comics!

One fairly minor point; Balmoral Castle is 514 miles. To drive that distance would take over nine hours. And DOUBLE EYELIDS? WTF? Is Harry a Creature here or maybe a mutant or something?
All in all nicely written, although the Royalty aspect ball got dropped a bit too early in the story. I favor a four or five chapter buildup. More meat AND potatoes with gravy that way.

nice story, wish it was longer

All the founders & Merlin

I was hoping you’d knock off Mischa...

“Unless Hogwarts and LSM does a joint event or something”? Some sort of tournament, perhaps?

You may not choose to fix it, especially since this fic is done, but the correct term is “improper”, not “unproper” as yusay in this chapter. Otherwise, a very good fic

to not have a sequel is an afront to this story.

There should so be a sequel

Would've made for a very poor story if you had enslaved him to Fumblemort.

Oh man! Don't tell me Kal-El has a vault in Gringotts that Harry just inherited! :) Or as Spaceballs One said just before it exploded " Just kidding! "

I know I started reading this story before but never finished it. I can only guess that I lost it somehow and couldn't remember how I found it. But I do remember liking it. And so I will finally get to finish it.