Please keep going!

please continue

I'm a little late but... Continue! Gladiator style: Live! Live! Live!

Oooh, I wonder if Commodus will bring Verina down with him into his madness. Update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! Amazing so far by the way! :)

AWESOME! Another Commadus/OC story! In dispite he was a pain the movie, I love reading stuff about him :)

*Scoffs* Died of natural causes my foot! What a lairer... Anyhoo, up-date soon! [Unless you want me to send Maximus after you]

Maximus: Don't drag me into this. I don't want to have any part your weird liking for Commadus. And I DO NOT want to have to go threaten the author of the story!

Me: Oh shut up! Go back to Fire Vein!

Fire Vein [a.k.a my sister]: Yes, yes, yes. I'll make you some tea to make you feel better. *To me* Why is he even reading that! I thought he couldn't read!

Me: Think what you like, but he can read! Plus, he was just walking around the house and had nothing else to do, so sense the fanfic was for Gladiator, he read it!

Fire Vein: *Rolls eyes* Make Commadus read it!

Commadus: Don't drag me into this either! We're not even supose to be here! Me and Maximus are both dead!

Me: Ya, and it was your fault! And it's and handful making sure you don't kill yourselves again! Anyway, I'm getting off subject. clickytheclickster2.0, I would love it if you up-date soon! Until next time!

Oh, wow! Amazing start! *applauds enthusiastically*

You have an excellent writing style and I do love the fact you've done research on the background of the story and all that. That's something more people on this site need to learn to do. It shows signs of a professional writer. *nods* )

Wonderful job! The two of them are so cute together. It's truly precious! XD Heheh...

I shall get back to you soon with the next chappie. Keep up the excellent work! D

Oh, wow. This is amazingly written. Seriously, I'm very impressed and proud of your writing style, too. D *applauds*

I love the description and the way you went about explaining from her point of view. *nods* It's very classy and well done. I shall review for the first chapter and then I'll get back to you on the other one. XD

Keep it up! D

I'm already loving this! Please continue!~ C: