Reviews for Ode to the Fallen
4433220011223344 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
How. Do. You. Write. So. Perfectly.
TELL ME FELLOW POET. TEACH ME!
The rhythm of this piece is catchy. [Am I the only weirdo who sings poems in my head?] The rhyming and scansion is brilliant.
Well-worded, well-done, and wow.
popcorn-codes chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
This was awesome! I really loved your poem! Most of these characters were minor, but they still died in a cruel and unfair way. They deserved to be rembered and you did it in a perfect way!
Elfera chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
YAY MY GROVER BOY WASN'T A CAREER MANIAC I LOVE YOU! Not in that way.
stalker chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
pretty for being written during math
ForeverYoursEmma chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
I think I may have read this before and I still like it. IT has a few grammatical problems and I didn't like the use of exclamation points. However, a poem about all the tributes was nice to read and I think overall it was a good poem.

-Emma

(Judge for Best Single Poem, Winter 2010 Hunger Games Fic Awards)
Tour de Force chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Oh my goodness, I really loved this one! Morbid rhymes hold a special place in my heart and I like that four stanzas per verse thing. Keeps it clean.

I also love your names. Very in-tune with the names in Panem.

- Tour de Force, Single Poem Judge of the Winter 2010 Hunger Games Fic Awards
spindleberried chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
I absolutely loved this poem. Of course, there were a few lines that seemed to be a little awkward when I read them, but others just simply amazed me. Wow; just wow.
our dancing days chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
WOW! All I can say really. I love the first 4 lines, they really started off th poem well. Well done, and I could never imagine thinking of all of those names, I'm terrible with them!
imaginingmary chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
This is amazing! I can't believe you wrote this is math class. :P

-HGN
EvanescingSky chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
This is awesome! I love it! The order of the words flows so nicely...well done!
BananaBabe903 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Aww I loved this...
Mewruru chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
That was one of the most amazing poems I've ever read. It's so sad that all those tributes died, and the reader never got to know their names. It was an excellent poem, and I hope you make more like it!
Munirabella chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Okay so this was pretty good. It was cute how you did the beginning and the end. I also thought you did a pretty good job with the names. You should keep working with poetry! It will help you to improve a lot! But you did a good job anyway!