Reviews for My Immortal |
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Biblio388 chapter 1 . 12/30/2018 Pretty bad day for all involved. Kind of expected it based on the tags, but definitely surprised by the direction it took so quickly. Looking forward to seeing how you merge the different series. |
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 40 . 12/8/2018 huh. |
shadyxlr chapter 1 . 8/7/2018 Well that went dark very fast... |
Anonymously amus chapter 26 . 6/11/2018 I probably missed something Ranma's curse gone after he became immortal? |
James Birdsong chapter 40 . 10/18/2015 Good story. I spent all day reading this. |
SixPerfections chapter 1 . 9/13/2015 Morbid. Dunno where you'll go from here. Damn. That has to be the worst, most stone-cold bitch Cologne in fanfiction. |
Leaprechaun1 chapter 40 . 9/9/2015 Was not expecting an ending like that at all. |
Leaprechaun1 chapter 18 . 9/3/2015 Can't find the lemon version could you send me the site or put a link in your profile? |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/11/2015 After the mess of having the Amazon's trying to get ranma to follow their laws he would never accept following motokos clan laws and much of it doesn't apply ranma is no innocent demon blades are practically created to trick people into wielding them weaker blades have tricked stronger people then motoko into wielding them and let the blades rake control of their bodies motoko is still a child expecting a child noatter how strong to be able to fight off a demon blade is foolish and making ryoga grand master over ranma completely ruins your story |
maryjane5000 chapter 2 . 1/21/2015 Okay I know if you eat mermaid flesh one of two things happen 1) You become Immortal 2) You become a creature So how is it Ranma is immortal when you say he didn't eat the flesh that means he ISN'T Immortal & the prolonged life he would have had should be shortened since he hasn't done any fighting so ki wells would have lessened |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2014 Isn't "My Immortal" the title of what is considered to be the worst fanfic ever? That doesn't seem a very inspired title to use for your own fic... |
diamondace4 chapter 15 . 1/2/2014 still trying to figure out why this is T rated lol...you said no lemon but almost ever sec scene is semi written out..that's ridiculous |
diamondace4 chapter 2 . 1/1/2014 For some reason the end of this chapter jut makes me want to scream. FUCK YOU CHELLIOS! |
diamondace4 chapter 1 . 1/1/2014 ah..the immortality explains how he would meet up with the crews |
Maximara chapter 21 . 10/28/2013 I'll a little confused here. In chapter 7 we are told that the Amazons were weakened and this is 10 years after the events that made Ranma immortal but here it sounds like the war started once the Phoenix and Musk learned about what happened to Ranma and annihilated them Amazons. So when did this war start or if the war was over and done why was Ranma still kept confined? |