When I first started reading I assumed it was Jack's viewpoint and only realised differently when he arrived on the scene. I went back and read it again and it made me realise how alike and yet how different Jack and Ianto are. I don't know whether you intended us to be fooled but it worked wonderfully if you did and added another dimension to the piece.

I thought this was great, believable, not over mushy but with poignant moments. WOW.

nice piece... got slightly confused about viewpoints but in a way that enhanced the dynamic that these two character have.. the way they meld together as a couple. You captured that hesitance and confusion as well as the undeniable love between them.

"demanding and offering at the same time, and how on Earth Jack manages that will probably always be a mystery to him."

I liked it. Not just the smut, the other parts as well, and the ones in between.

That was beautifully done. :)