Reviews for Falling For the First Time
Guest chapter 8 . 6/14
Cute, would have liked more.
OmegaUltima chapter 8 . 3/8/2019
Just as it was getting good, too...
huongdaoroma chapter 8 . 9/19/2018
it was getting good! why did you abandon it?
GXY-2013 chapter 8 . 4/7/2018
Hey buddy, when are you gonna continue with the story? It's been 8 years now! I really want to see what happens next.
firebluebird2006 chapter 8 . 5/30/2017
7 years latter and no update did you abandon this story?
Rod Vulpine chapter 8 . 3/5/2017
Next upload which is... perhaps never. Well it was a fun read. Too bad I never got to the juicy part. Where Shampoo defends Keitaro from these vile beasts that are the so called "tenants" of Hinata inn.
Rod Vulpine chapter 7 . 3/5/2017
Mai Waifu! XD
Rod Vulpine chapter 4 . 3/5/2017
X/ Okay this is bs. These women are too nasty to be love interests to Keitaro. And how can they expect for him to like them when all he gets from them is pain and suffering. Also they like to use him as his chore monkey.
Rod Vulpine chapter 3 . 3/5/2017
Yes! About time our guy had some good luck! He deserves it!
Rod Vulpine chapter 2 . 3/5/2017
Bruh! Da lucky bastard! He doesn't know just what great fortune has befallen him. Shampoo will work herself to the ground to make him happy and Naru? All she ever did was hate him for being a man and punch him. Do the math Keitaro! It's as easy as 11.

Also I love how easily they found enormous loopholes in Keitaro's promise! XD Cologne is amazing!
Rod Vulpine chapter 1 . 3/5/2017
Typical MC. Too focused on the promised girl to see a superior candidate for his affection when he litterally hits her in the face. XD

Seriously though, the fact that this guy thinks that the harpies at Hinata inn are blameless tells me he is suffering from one hell of a Stockholm's syndrome. They litterally bully him physically every day and he just think that's normal and should just think of it as normal. Well, hopefully Shampoo will defend her future husband to death. ;)

Also I totally ship Keitaro and Shampoo now! :3
NarutosBrat chapter 7 . 2/16/2017
You know, that entire situation with Keitaro getting married was Naru's fault, and when they realize that, I think it might get interesting.

If it's not obvious by now, no, I didn't like Naru. Frankly, I place her in the same category as Akane Tendo, and Pt.1 Sakura.
NarutosBrat chapter 2 . 2/15/2017
Personally, I think Shampoo is a better catch than Naru, but that's just me.
Alamandorious chapter 8 . 9/5/2015
I really, really hope you'll consider continuing this.

It's a fun read, and it's interesting seeing a character aside from Ranma get crossed over into something else. I'm curious to see where this is going, and again I hope you will continue it. Last chapter was also a bit on the short side, but it was still amusing.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/27/2015
Maybe you need to stop writing you are killing good stories we want to see updated by piling on 100 new ones.
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