| Reviews for Nightfall |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 6/5 cool |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/5 j'aime bien ton histoire surtout le nom des profs ! |
 Jatzygirl chapter 3 . 5/12/2018 Gidday. I don't care about your diction, punctuation, or whatever. I just love the fact you naming a horse Bella. I laughed. I think y'all one smart cookie. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/18/2014 Your structure sucks. Diction sucks. Grammar sucks. Yet for the life of me I'm enamored with the rare relationship - coupling - between Alice and Jasper |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2014 Amused statement: Bella is a horse Seriously that made my day today! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/23/2014 I really like it untill so far! I like the idea that it's alice who is moving to Forks, and I'm curious how the story will develop |
| GrimFWaters chapter 16 . 2/13/2014 I loved this story- good job writing it :) |
| GrimFWaters chapter 5 . 2/13/2014 Correction: Felix H. Robertson was the youngest major in the CSA Sorry I couldn't help but to point that out. I love this story though lol |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2014 Bella is a HORSE?! *falls over laughing* |
| Slytherin of the Sea chapter 16 . 11/26/2013 Cool story :) |
| sjwht chapter 16 . 10/10/2013 Great story! |
| Divonne chapter 15 . 7/8/2013 ohhhhhhhhh love it. n i loved charlie's reaction. |
| Divonne chapter 13 . 7/8/2013 love love love |
| Divonne chapter 12 . 7/8/2013 LOVED IT... DONT STOP WRITING... |
| Divonne chapter 11 . 7/8/2013 LOVED IT...WAYYYYY BETTER... |
