Bella is really annoying in this story. Shes known Edward all of a day and she freaks the fuck out when he leaves for a few minutes? Clingy much?

hope you update x

It took me less than 24 hrs to get to chapter 23 . I think your story is amazing and captivating. I hope write loads more.

the only lose end left really is Victoria. If the wolves had gotten her, Paul would have strutted over to Cullen Manor himself to declare their mighty victory!

I think Canon-Jacob would have harbored "crush" feelings for Bella, regardless of New Moon. I think only the fact that he realized Edward was "boyfriend material" in her eyes, made him not pursue her in Twilight. Remember his reaction to Mike finding them on the beach? "is that your boyfriend?" and how glad he looked when she said, "Definitely not!" ?

I have the Twilight Movie soundtrack CD. Just started listening to it in the car recently. for every song, I try to match it mentally with the actual action taking place in the movie. Supermassive Black Hole is one of my FAVES, as is the Baseball scene (before it all goes to hell in a handbasket, anyway!).

PLEASE! come back and finish this AWESOME! story its been years since this last post and it sounds like you have more to say ;) i hope your rl is ok ;D

I really hope you get this! This story was really great but sooo unfinished. It cries for a sequel. So many unaddressed issues: memory, seeing Charlie again would be awesome, moving forward with Jake and Cullen-Pack relations, Victoria issue- those are just a few open directions that need futures! Then trips and becoming part of the family, on and on. We maybe don't need quite so much Edward pondering and self bashing and fear to move to each new level and fear on the new born Bella, we just want to know what happens! I'd do it myself but my creative imagination is about 5% of what yours is. But whether you continue or not, thank you for a wonderful story. David

This was wonderful! Where is sequel? Thank you!

Jana, this was fun and lovely. if you go on and finish it some day I will be longing to follow it. But it is also a lovely ending to a wonderful story. I hope the years have helped you find peace with your self. You are in my prayers to the God I love.

It is a good start. I like the interplay.

I loved this story soo much! I really liked your writing and where it was going, its too bad its nit finished,but i enjoyed it anyway:)

Few years late on the review, but no it's not sucking. Enjoying the read and your depiction of scatterbrained Edward.

I loved this imaginative, well written story. Thank you.

Thank goodness the next chapter is up...