Loved it. Please write more

I love it sososososososos much, please update soon

I'm glad that you wrote this. I hate dameon too :D

So yeah I really wish that there was a Rhen x Lars in the ending of the game. I love those two so much. And I love your story too.

Even though i haven't read it all yet. Anyways a very good job. I like it so much!

This is really good, though you could continue it. If you need any ideas let me know. I've been told i have too many anyway!

*cough* Lars is not brave enough to tell Rhen he likes her.

The plot is pretty good and so is the story.

Just a little piece of advice: try to make chapters longer and richer in description. Also, I found it strange that Rhen's mood changed that fast in those circumstances. She was still in the graveyard, by Danny's tomb.

Anyway, good job so far,

Cheers~

yeah thank you,,, this chapter was pretty short but interesting...:) i like the idea and can't wait to see what happens next...when Dameon comes...ewwww still hate him and espessially his half-bald empty head,,,, :)

Oh, this is interesting. I hate Dameon too, I think Lars is the best. I am still shocked there wasn't an ending with Lars. When I heard there wasn't one, I stopped playing and never finished the game. I don't quite like Danny but it's not like I wanted him to die... I liked this story very much. So, please continue, I can't wait any longer :-)

oooo, more please!

why was it peta again..good story