Oh, poor Draco. I'm glad Charlie finally decided to stick up for him! I really liked his characterisation here - I mean, he was a little out of character, but that's almost a given with the pairing, but he was close enough to canon that the changes were believable. I loved the line [handy to have around when dragons were near]; yes, I imagine Charlie would be useful if that situation ever arose. Draco had some really good lines in this :)

There were a few minor spelling and grammar issues - a lot of missing commas, sometimes you didn't start a new line for a change in speaker - but overall this was a well-written piece, and it was sweet and funny and a great read.

Aw! That was so cute! Love the ending! Poor Dray! Ron was always such a bastard but when the twins started saying things, in really made my heart pang. Love it!

I know that this is a one-shot but you should like write he dinner with the same kind of thing happening, then Charlie would just out the scary dragon tamer voice and yell at everyone :) I really liked his story. Love this pairing

I know its a one-shot, but could you do a couple more? With the same icy-family feel? But different situations? Like the dinner at The Burrow? Maybe? Cuz i love this fic!

i wanted to cry... it just broke my heart to see how they treat poor Draco... though the idea of him in a maid outfit is kinky and kinda hot.

very well done for taking so little time to write it!

Awww, poor Draco. He'll have to put up with the whole Weasley's and whats worse is they cant send Fred, George and Ron away.

I wish him all the best of luck xD

I love it, Charlie is sooo sweet x

if it were me i wud have ended up sayinh 'well fuck/shit' to the invo...but then again draco is more dignifyed...

This was great. I wish there was more though

like this. please continue.

I liked it. It would be nice if you continued.