Reviews for TFA Kaleidoscope
Kaiju Alpha chapter 27 . 7/6
I'm guessing the antagonists are gonna become the Predacons.
Kaiju Alpha chapter 8 . 7/6
So, were the robots in Optimus' dream Sharkticons?
ssjSega chapter 26 . 5/28
Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Really looking forward to Optimus and Sari coming back into the fray and the Rogue Police Car storyline. Here's to hoping you're doing well in these times.
allmightylord chapter 27 . 5/3
with all the talk that kelly car is going to be barrcade i say it becomes the ge 1 version of prowl
Spacemagpie chapter 27 . 4/16
Ahhh! I love your version of Optimus. And Optimus - Sari dynamic. The rest of the heroes too, but Optimus here is my even favorit-ier than usually, an ideal mix of a few of his backgrounds with its own twist! PTSD-ed soldier who does what he *knows* is right, ready to sacrifice and with a soft spot for all things little and needing protection - that's my boy!
Now, all I am waiting for is meeting with the Elite Guard - what is changed? Did Ultra knew him/about him, even if Optimus was just an oridinary soldier? Does Council know who it was that took the Allspark away? Mayby at last this version of Alpha Trion knows *something*?
I am reading this story since beginning and check for the updates regulary, even being at the odds with the Transformers for some time now (hate what they did to IDW Optimus and the worse and worse style of the animations). So it just says about how good your story is. Can't wait for the next chapters - with Optimus and Sari!
Mazamba chapter 27 . 4/13
Finally got around to reading this. Seriously, it's been on my tabs since you published it.

Anywho, great job, as usual. Really loving the cop OCs. The original TFA could've used some more human allies, though I also get why they didn't add any. Logically speaking, someone would've wondered by Sari can jump off Optimus' eight-meter height without breaking every bone in her body. No other humans meant no one to compare her to.
Vitlium chapter 27 . 4/6
i swear if its Barricade XD But I hope damn I love Cade
Guest chapter 27 . 2/23
I hope you update soon
Guest chapter 27 . 2/23
are you going to have the three dinobots from transformers animated or all five dinobots? Could you add more dinobots?
KDBloomfield chapter 27 . 2/21
PLEASE UPDATE!
T501 chapter 27 . 12/7/2019
Oh, wow it's been a long time since I've read through this fic! I particularly enjoyed Optimus and Sari's relationship, and with the former's alternate portrayal as a Great War soldier. I'm excited for whatever new conflict this will cause between him and the Autobots! I hope to see more of this story!
ssjSega chapter 8 . 11/29/2019
Y'know, considering Optimus's flashbacks combined with how devastating the Great War was, it'd be pretty safe to say he's got a serious case of PTSD.

Part of me also can't help but think of Optimus and Sari as having a lighter and softer version of Kratos and Atreaus's father/child relationship in God of War. Sari helps Optimus find some semblance of normality after all the trauma and tragedy he's had to go through, while Optimus gives Sari the one thing she needs most: someone to call family.

Seriously though, the bonding between Sari and Optimus is probably one of my favorite things about the story, and the two of them are also my favorite characters here.

Keep up the good work, and I hope all goes well for you!
RandomReader chapter 20 . 11/4/2019
*sari not dark, don’t you just hate autocorrect.
RandomReader chapter 20 . 11/4/2019
*sari not dark don’t you just hate autocorrect.
RandomReader chapter 20 . 11/4/2019
I don’t know how I feel about Prowl/Arcee pairing. That pair was meant for Ratchet. It was to show that even though he is a dick on the outside he still has a soft spot inside. Almost motherly. You also see this later on in the series when he takes it upon himself to look after dark while the other bots fight. Even though he’s not really fond of humans. Now ratchets just a grumpy dick with no other traits to counteract that.
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