Very well done. Perfectly in character and I really liked the sweet ending. A very touching story.

True of the five of them, Parker, Eliot, and Nate are the most complicated. Although, Parker is indeed the most, she was the broken one, in fact I think in some ways she still is.

From most complicated to least: Parker, Nate-Eliot, Sophie, Hardison.

i really liked your story! i love leverage and i love parker and eliot-u wrote them very well and i hope you write more stories for them!

Beautifully written. I like how he was gentle with her even while being physically imposing to make a point (something that would usually really bother me). Loved the ending.

that was great loved it

I love that someone addressed this 'issue' eliot and Parker have been having. Its been annoying me and it was high time Parker learned her lesson. I thought they were both really InCharacter as far as dialogue and action, you were also able to make both very sympathetic and beleivable. All around great fic, really liked thr hinys at ship too, lol.

Pj

wow that was unexpected. i actually cried. i am by no means a eliot/parker shipper. i only read the friendship but that was a touching piece. great job!

this is cute and lovely specially toward the end...

I love it. It's not the usual Hurt/Comfort variety which is why this is so amazing. I love how you have created the tension and the way you've dissolved it too. :D

Awwwwwwwwwww! so cute.

see, to me i dont think she's necessarily "mocking" him on purpose, she's just so used to him being the strong protector. and didnt hit him with a crowbar on purpose. plus she was hit by a car too. it was a fake hit but she was bound to be a little bruised. so she probably thought with him being bigger he could handle it. plus, on the show i think it could promt something like this - where she sees a diff side of him. and it could promt a whole new thing for eliot.

great job on the story, i really liked it. :)

great job...I really love this to peices!

Aww - I liked this! You bring up some valid point and wrote the characters well.

for being your first leverage fic, you really captured one of the more subtle undercurrents. way to go :D