Me encanta tu Fanfiction,te recomiendo varias intrusucciones en este orden descrito a continuacion:
.Plantea nuevos conflictos y enfrentamientos espaciales,incluyendo la aparicion de otros Jedi,ejemplos deseables podrian ser Aayla secura de nuevo,Luminara Unduli o que tal Obi wan,anakin y Ashoka tano

.Tambien deberian aparecer otras naves espaciales del UNSC,me encantaria ver a la UNSC Infinity o los Cargueros clase Poseidon y Orion

.Que haya la aparicion de naves Covenant comandadas por las Espadas de Sanghelios,ademas,plantea la formacion de un nuevo Covenant a partir de la unificacion de los diferentes remanentes Covenant y que Sidious es descubierto al final de la Guerra de los Clones,por lo que activa la Orden 66 y huye junto a su aprendiz Darth Vader a la estacion Estrella de la muerte,
todavia en construccion

Genuinely the worst chpater to quit on short of doing it mid-battle. especially with your closing teaser. I thought I was going to get the reaction to Pietts attack and vastly more interesting see how the Jedi react to Johns one Spartan assault. Damningly disappointing.

Noooooooooooooooo

Great shielding description here.

I think the UNSC could develop a missile that is designed to deliver an A.I. to the hull of an enemy ship housed inside a small case that as deployed the missile appears to get destroyed and the flotsam drifts toward the enemy ship the small bot housed A.I. then attaches to the comms array and disables the entire ship.

I remember reading an stwr-halo fanfic where a cis ships attacks an unsc ship and the unsc sides with republic. the unsc was part of an allinace made up of elite,jackals, and hunters that what i remember

very fun and interesting story. loved the developments and really fell in love with it. such a shame you cancelled, but here's hoping for either a sudden revival or an adoption

You are as as #$% mo#*$%&*#$$# this is a good storyline f#$%your negative reviews anonymous reader

This was certainly an amazing price of fiction indeed.
Well done.

Great read, I love stopping by years later and still love the tone, detail, realism, and justice you do to the halo and Star Wars Series.
It’s such a shame how bad the games are now after halo 4 and 5, this reminds me of better times when chief was and is humanity’s best soldier and is treated like such. Chief still more badass here then he compared to today canon version of him.

Please ignore the trolls in the comment section, great story and glad to read it again.

is this up for adoptation? i might take it

YOU ASSHOLE HOW COULD YOU!

Fuck you. Go eat your transvestite mom's ass.

I don’t know if you purposefully changed it, but in Halo canon, HIGHCOM and the UEG headquarters are located in Sydney, Australia.