Ah you left it at interesting place.

Great story. Believable and interesting characterizations. Crisp dialogue. Nice changes to plot line.

Appreciate you sharing it with us

Nice work

Thanks for tamping down everyone's worst tendencies.

Why was Hermione stuck in castle

Yes, Ron has been great in this story. It’s still WRONG to pair him with Hermione (for both their sakes). Same goes for Harry and Ginny.

Kids need to travel and work before settling down.

Worried about Luna and Neville. Anyway to bring them along.

So look for the Union Label

Love how Dobby thinks proactively, even with the smallest steps

Old song runs through my head of “Secret Agent Elf

Nice job

Though they should have ripped sleeve. (Looking for way to get rid of Snape.)

Interesting backstory for Remus. Like it.

Hope you eventually let Dobby stomp Snape

Here’s hoping Sirius starts to pull it together before they leave. Mallory will have him killed.

Nice way to handle. Little drama, cool magic, and Dobby overseeing.

Not trusting Dumbles at all. Surprised he will allow visit to go forward. Glad he picked Flitwick.

Love seeing Dobby turning out be organizer.

But agree he needs pay. Or at least access to bank account.

Good work with transcripts. Very sneaky on Dobby’s part