If Dannyl was dressed as a pirate I'm sure Tayend wouldn't mind getting kidnapped.

Hilarious! I love it! The part with horses and whips ... Oh my God, I thought I was going to die of laughter! Excellent work :)

LOL so funny :D I wish we saw Tayend dressed up at the end, but at the same time maybe it is best left to our imaginations ;) this style of fic really suits you, the whole funny/innuendo conversation between dannyl and tayend. I hope you write lots more like it! you said on your profile you are doing a spoof of the novice? I cant wait! and you also mentioned you dont mind getting suggestions, well would you ever think of doing a fic set at armje? With Dannyl and Tayend at the end of The Novice i mean. I would love to see how you would do it :D

Don't be nervous! I love the innuendo Tayend getting in there! Hahaa, it makes me laugh. Poor Dannyl.

Can't wait to see what Tayend's surprise is going to be...He's totally shameless.

Love,

StuffRocksInnit

xxx

Tay, dressed up in all those costumes. Very...Tay. Very nice story, you've really nailed the characters. Keep writing

Oh Laura you know how much I love you and this fic.

However I hope you also know how terrible I am at reviews ;)

I shall just say that this is like a giant hug of greatness.

Tayend actually just mouthed a script for a porn movie. o_O I mean, the whip and the horsey.:D:D:D:D:D

SO BRILLIANTLY AMAZING!

"You don't usually need an excuse to whisper dirty things to me in Vindo."

:D:D:D

Adopting an innocent expression, Tayend continued, "And you'd make a fine horse for me!"

"You can go find another horse to ride!" The magician cried indignantly.

"Now, now Dannyl," Tayend explained cheerfully, "If your aren't a good horsey, I'll have to get my whip out!"

Dying of mortification suddenly seemed like a good way to escape Tayend's teasing. But Dannyl managed to announce sternly, "If I ever catch you sneaking around with a whip, I'm going to lock you out of my bedroom at night."

"You better make sure to lock your windows while you're at it."

GENIUS.

Not sure how to respond to this, Tayend moved on. "How about a novice?"

Dannyl felt a mad urge to throw something at Tayend. "What the hell makes you think I'd be excited by you dressing up as a teenager?"

The scholar said loftily, "Not all novices are under twenty. Look at Farand! He certainly looks good in those novice robes… and I bet I'd look even better! And if you like, you can pretend to be my teacher!" Tayend gave his friend a rueful wink.

LOLOLOLOL.

And there are more, many, many more. I just LOVE the way Tayend acts like a little child, grinnning and ending his sentences with and exclamation mark all the time.:D And how Dannyl spits his wine out at his ideas, but actually loves them.:D

I LOVE THEM TOOOOOO MUUUUUUUUCCHHHH.

Overall, it has been a wonderful fic and I hope you post more soon!:D

Oooh, I still love this! :D And the ending is wonderful! *gigglesnort*

Loved the mention of the warrior outfit! :D I was HOPING you'd bring it in! :) *sigh* Tay must look SOOO hot in it! *winks*

OH MY GOD!

So I was having a fag after a hard day's work and reading this at the same time. You had me choke twice, no three times!

The part about whispering dirty words to Dannyl in Vindo was soooo funny! This was the first choke.

Second time was the part about being a bad horsey! Hohohohoho, that was so naughty!

Third time was Dannyl telling him that he wouldn't get excited to see Tayend dressing up as a teenage novice. That was hilarious!

Wohoo, this was soo good. Though a little disappointed that this is the end of the series but still I enjoyed every bit of it :D

Do write something about them playing dress up sometime later. I'm sure Dannyl will look ridiculous! *_*

Woo! I love this fic, really imagineative and fun :D

More please!

Horribly late, I know! Sorry! *hugs*

But OMG I still LOVE this fic. The pirate outfit is just SOOO horribly amusing! :D And HOT! Mmm!

"How may I serve you, my Lord?"

I believe I mentioned this before but THIS line...THIS is PURE GOLD! I nearly died with happiness when I read this! :D

And the jester suggestion was brilliant! *sigh* Your fics are always fantastic, and I can't wait to see more from you! *tells self to be patient...patient*

*gives up* MORE PLEASE! SOOON! :D

Tay, you have a nasty sense of humour;D Very nice, keep updating

Had to hold in fits of giggles to stop myself disturbing my sister! What a great story this is turning out to be. I don't know where you come up with these ideas.

Oh god, oh god, oh god, this is SO funny. "How ma you, my lord?" LOLOLOL

Again I must say how perfectly in character your Tayend and Dannyl are. I just can't WAIT til part 3, Tayend as an acrobat, servant or a jester.:D I am so in love with this!

Update ASAP!

Ohh, this is soo funny. I read this the first thing I woke up in the morning and my day just got better because of this!

Please dress Dannyl up, I'm sure if will be hilarious.

As for Tayend, I can't imagine him in a jester suit, probably because another fav fictional character of mine is such a great jester which no one can replace :p Still don't stop because of this, and if you want any reference to this great character, PM me, if it helps with your writing :)