What a great story! I can’t imagine 4 kids and twins to boot. My 2 sons kept me jumping.

What a great gift. Bella is better than me. I would have blurted it out to him when I found out.

Awww. I have to ad it that I have forgotten the house they went to. :(

I can't wait to see what Bella has in mind!

I don't think Bella is going to last very long by herself. But, see that she needs to do this for herself.

Where is the dog going to go while she is at work? To work with Edward? Puppies can't be left alone for 8 hours a day 5 days a week.

I just remembered that we never found out what was missing from Bell’ Dresser. I am thinking it was the pictures that he showed her..

PTSD can take awhile to get over.

Hopefully, these two will have a well deserved reprieve from all the shit that have gone through.

I can't believe that Edward let himself be purposely caught. Why didn't he surprise Reynolds and take his gun?

Wow! So glad that Bella was able to save Edward and kill that scumbag Reynolds.

OMG! Another heart racing chapter.

I am sooooo glad that I did not read this as a WIP. I would be a mess...a puddle of goo...

I am wondering why Jacob just didn't declare bankruptcy?

And I really hope that Edward and crew have located Bella via satellite by now AND that she gets away. I am thinking they would either need to enlist the local authorities for help or get there by plane or helicopter.

And I hope to goodness that she took the spindle with her as a weapon.

How scary for her to know that Reynolds was going to take her and most probably rape and murder her.

How the hell could Jacob live with that? I guess he has no conscious. Hoping he gets locked up for a long time once this is over.

OMG! That was an awesome chapter! My heart was racing through most of it.

Go Edward! LOVED the last paragraph.

Whatever was missing from Bella's dresser has to be a clue. I think Jacob is taking Bella to Reynolds and the missing guard has something to do with all of this.

But why did Jacob get involved with Reynolds in the first place? That has me stumped. Unless he is hiding something and he thought Bella was going to find out whatever it was.

I am sooooooo glad the traitor isn't Emmett.

Jessica talked to Jacob quite a bit it seems. And she is the Queen of asking questions. Maybe she knows something that could be helpful.

Bella IS an trained FBI agent, so she is not going to go down without a fight.

At least she is wearing the tracking ring.

Bella should stop being so stubborn and naive about her protection. Yes, they are in a federal building but so is the mole.

I thought Jacob was too obvious. Lol

I have a feeling the sh*t is about to hit the fan.

I am not convinced tat Jessica is not a red herring.

I love the way you tell the story. Here I am on chapter 20, and I sill have no clue who the accomplice is. LOL

I am wondering about the prison log. We have still to see it. I thought Emmett was getting it.

I think Jessica is too obvious.

I am still thinking the mole is Emmett and now he wants to be aware of where Edward and Bella are at all times...

Emmett was at the wedding and could have taken the picture of them dancing. I am not sure about the other pictures. Maybe there is more than one mole?

And what is Bella missing from her dresser?

So I don’t think the accomplice is Emmett because he was with Bella and Edward when her house was broken into.

Someone must have disarmed the alarm system and picked the lock on one of the doors...

Chelsea is a bi-ach. I pictured her as a tall big boobed blue eyed blonde. Lol

I love Vancouver and Stanley Park. When we were there, the herons were nesting. A woman drove up in a convertible and stopped right under the huge tree in front of a sign that said not to park there, for obvious reasons. I told her that she might want to move and I kid you not, right as she told me to mind my own business, a splat of bird shit landed in her hair.

There was also a man building rock hoodoos that was fascinating. The day ended with a trip to Granville island where we saw a naked bicycle parade. Lol