That's... gritty. I wasn't expecting it going in.

I'm not sure what happened at the hospital. But I'm glad Sakura's there for Naruto

Jeeeezus... I just.. Fucking hell.. Again, brilliantly written, but jezus..

well i dont say this often but holy crap that was good now were is the rest of this because that was intierly to short and i demand more... i mean i ask politly for more umm please
but great story tho a little ooc really but i still love it

Is Sasuke dead? I was hoping for Naruto to have a happy ending.

U write such drepressing stories...but i can't help but read them...n eventually fall in lov with them...

please keeping writing...i really like your stories

Okay, look. I don't know what to say.

I'm so speechless. I've been reading this story all day, taking much-needed breaks in between,
I don't know how to express myself.. I'm at a complete loss for words. This was one of the best things I have ever read; in my entire 18 years of life.

I shit you not. Beats even some published books I've read. Heavens, your train of thought is a treasure. Please, never stop writing. Your characterizations of each character were immaculate, paramount, and absolutely overwhelming. I loved everything. I don't care if I entirely detest half of the pairings you used, the story, itself, makes up for absolutely everything. Fuck pairings. This was amazing.

I just want to say that this fic reminded me an awful lot of my favorite movie of all time, "Happiness". It uses the same transitioning POVs of characters, just as you did here. I don't know if you've seen it, but it brought me to utter tears. Just like this story did.

I just.. I don't know. I could go on forever, truly. I'll never forget this. Off to the sequel I go. c:

xx

well... that was an interesting chapter... poor Neji. well pushing this chapter aside loved the rest.

Oh gosh! This is genious! Is there really a sequel? I want to see how things play out! Well, InoSaku pair is fairly easy sail, and frankly I'm not big on yuri, even if they are sweet and all here, but the other two "pair" and Temari have quite an uncertain future.

It was refreshing in it's difference and utterly oppressing with all these feelings - poor Naru, you'll have to fix his heart and mood as soon as possible!

Thanks!

...Hrm. The writing in this is pretty damn great, and realistic to boot. But I NEVER thought I would see Ino portrayed as a thick-necked, "corn-fed Iowan native", extremely muscular and lacking in the chest (!), quiet, intense and cool lesbian. That's quite a character interpretation. Not to say it's bad but supremely different. There's "walking off the beaten path" and "taking a helicoper 'cause beaten paths are for losers". I could say the same for Sasuke the Puerto Rican, muscular with a touch of fat...eh, you get what I mean. A thousand tons of Creativity Points, awarded to you, ma'am!

I was not expecting Sasuke to be in love with Neji. It completely took me by surprise! This is the first time I've read a story with Sasuke being not Asian or White and I'm liking it so far. It fits with the setting and the background you've given him. I'd like to think that Sasuke's neighbor is Naruto, but I'm normally wrong with predictions when it comes to stories. Great job!

I loved this fic so much that I dont even

know what to say...

I was hooked at chap 1 and now thats over Im a lil sad:(

Anyways the fic was great and it actually reminded me of a movie similar to it with everyone being connected and such but yeah great fic and it was a pleasure reading it

I think this is the best story I've read from you. I love how you made the characters and how you made hem act. I like how life screwed them over and how they got over it (the sexy times helped a lot too.)

Thanks for the fic!

I'm sobbing like maaahahaaad Dx why is it over? -searches for sequal-

Aaaaah! I would never have guessed it was Shikamaru! This is so sad! Everyone wants someone else! Is anyone happy? Kay, Ino and Sakura, but is Sakura shuuuuur? -sigh- Gaara..it did sort of click in; Kankuro stayed away from Shikamaru, and Shikamaru was very independant. Holy crap, how did you think about all of these? It will always astound me when people can think of things like mystery novels and stuff where the ending was achieved by all the little things, the details, along the way, like misdirection! Like in Harry Potter, the classes in which they actually focused on had a significance in the end. But yours is different! It was constant, unlike random classes. That's what baffles me;the whole style of the story was one big string of pieces that were each a part of each other. So unlike a train track or an ordinary jigsaw, but an all-out 3D sculpture! I am blown away by the magnanimous-ness your art x-x

I want to cry! Dx one-sided feelings are just .. Gah, I'm crying. I love Gaara! But I feel so bad for Neji! Forty-year old Neji... He's forty years old. Can't get over that xP iheartthischapter 3