Oh my...THIS was incredibly wonderful!

This was such a well-paced and well-written story. I really enjoyed it.

Bit sad, but a great fic!

Nicely done.

8D

Okay, probably not the most appropriate reaction to the darkness of this story, but HOW CAN I HELP IT? I mean, my eyes are goggling without my permission. There are so many ways in which this is just utterly perfect. I mean, whoa. character deaths, even minor ones, can be hard to handle. Yet your reactions are down pat. I mean, nothing feels showy, or over the top. Even sherlock's hesitation is geniune, from your writing. His reaction upon seeing Harry, and also when telling John is just amazing. I felt his fear and worry, because it finally felt like the 'sociopath' was a handicap instead of a strength, and gah. I really wish I could say more amazing wonderful things, but I'm rapidly losing coherency, so to sum it up; thank you so much for this. really.

Love,

Lady Merlin

This is really lovely. I like the stillness of John's emotions and Sherlock's misapprehension. I liked the characterization of Harry and Clara. Very nice piece.

This was wonderful. Everything about it was wonderful. Please write more.

i freakin' love sherlock. far too much.

but, i freakin' hate you. HARRY! how could you?

heheh. no seriously though, that storyline was dead on. i can see something like that happening in the tv show, no joke. i can see it showing sherlock's human side - which it did. it was fantastic; truly, wonderfully fantastic.

and also, your writing style is so interesting - and by that i mean good, and i mean the way it's split up not only between perspectives, but with texts and blog updates aswell.

sorry for this ridiculously long review, i've got into a habit of that of late :'D well done though, really. i enjoyed it, no matter how sorry i felt for the people at that funeral. mostly john.

"Oh great, a houseful of queers."

Better believe it, Mr. Watson xD

Oh, that end was lovely. The way Sherlock was quietly learning how to be there for John was very touching.

Sequal! Please!

This was so sensitively done, brilliant character voices and a genuinely brilliant story.

I love this... I wish it were long :( x

Oh, I thought that this was absolutely fantastic. You portrayed the strong emotions here so well, I was able to completely empathise with John and Clara. Beautiful. I very much enjoy your Sherlock fics - they're like a nicotine patch while my addiction to the tv show cannot be sustained!

I'm not sure if it's just my computer or whatever, but some of your formatting doesn't seem to work? Instead of being in italics, some words just have the 'i /i'. Just thought I'd let you know :)

I really hope there's more to come.

Becca

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I can't believe this is over :( I loved it so much, especially the way you've written Sherlock, so good.

What? 'END' ? That's /it/! But it was so gooooood!

Hey, just wanted to say that I really love this story! I read 'Topical' and it was very funny ("Mrs Hudson's out, so we can make as much noise as we want."!) and this goes into greater depth with the characters. I can't help but wonder what it was that Sherlock wanted him to pick up from the pharmacist's though! *wink* Looking forward to part three, it's so dramatic!

Squilf x