awesome story loved it all except he part where Nathan left the bar with Rachael im glad he didn't do anything but when you love someone you don't get drunk and then leave the bar with someone else but you are an amazing writer and I loved the story

Your story's weird and disconnected from reality. You've paced it too fast, the dialogue is weak, and everything about it is making the Naley relationship unconvincing to me.

This was a good story!

I love how Dan is the good guy!(: I always wished when I was watching the show he would really change!

Great story!

really liked how you ended this story

good

Really good

pps

really good

The was a good chapter to read. I loved the amount of freindship and interacting between everyone. The way you are slowly getting them back on track is great.

update soon.

i loved the interaction betwween friends. the way you are bringing back together is great.

update soon

I really like that you had Haley stick with her guns in this chapter. I'm glad that she got a chance to testify against Grant - I think it would really help her heal. As for Nathan, I'm really glad that she didn't take him back and is focusing on herself and the baby. Not alot of ppl probably share the same opinion but if I was in Haley's shoes and eventho she is very forgiving - it would be extremely difficult to forgive a man that you are in love with, who has accused you of having your rapist's baby and the fact that he went out, got drunk and went home with another girl isn't helping his situation out.

Good chapter! keep up the good work.

that chapter was great, I didn't know who to feel sorry for between them both. I really that are able to try and talk to each other in the next couple of chapter to try and work some things out together.

Really hope you can update again soon

Also i update ch 14 of my story.

Wow, lots of depth in this chapter! Great job! Can't wait to see what happens next!