You are a wordsmith

nice

Reread after Tony's finale. Well written. Enjoyed it still. Thanks for posting

I was reading over at Hundun and she recommended you. I just read NCIS and saw this story. I almost didn't read it, as I usually only read longer ones. BUT, WOW. I am certainly glad I did. Moved along very nicely and very well written. Thank you for a good story. Wish you had written more.

Wonderful story! So exciting to read, I loved it! :D

This was so amazing please tell me there is a follow up with baby Audrey xx

Oh man, I had to read this straight through. I couldn't stop. I loved it! I think you did a great job portraying them as becoming parents!

Aaaawww my name is audrey too:) and this was just a beautifully written story.

I see now everything is Tony's fault, and Ziva is not being held responsible for her actions at all. You have her says to her baby in the hospital "for you" when she should have been in tears apologizing to her baby for risking her chance at life. What I take away from this is Ziva does not believe Tony is skilled and intelligent enough as an agent to handle himself. But I have enjoyed this story and the flow and your ability to write and stay focused. I hope that you do not misunderstand my statements, I think this is an amazing story

I know how long ago this was written but I think as long as the review window is open that is what the author wants. I would purchase any published work they have.

I have to say you are right this is upsetting in so many ways, she is so sick she can barley stand but because she has to go and give up her life for Tony. The baby does not matter she has plenty of time to think about it as she drives to the school, get pass swat, Gibbs, police and into a room no one else can and saves the day! It would be easier to understand them in a store together and a gunman pulls a gun and shoots and she jumps in front of Tony. I hope Tony man's up and moves out, not because he does not love her and want to be with her so she can understand how wrong in so many ways. But this is your story so on to chapter 6.

Amazing story, filled my eyes with tears of joy and sadness plenty of times and they were simply in character and just themselves and its what made this story so amazing

I love this so much :) Will there be a sequel?

awwww

i like this story

What is this wonderful piece of art I find myself reading at 5 am?! I couldn't stop after the first chapter, I just couldn't, this is so magical, so sweet, so perfect.

And if the last chapters weren't amazing enough as they were you mentioned Ray Lamontagne and that's all it took for me to cry like a baby. Warning: Reading this story while listening to Ray will most likely result in dehydration from all the crying. But I cried happy tears because if I wasn't in love with this ship before reading the story this just did the trick. Wow, so many feelings that I never thought they'd share. But now that I've read this it makes sense.

I LOVE THIS. Whenever I'm having a bad day or we go through a Tiva dry period I'll come back to this lovely story, this makes me happy. :)

Thank you for sharing!

Oh my gosh. This was literally the cutest Tiva story I think I've ever read! I love the way you really built up the characters so that by the last chapters, I was feeling the same emotions as Tony and Ziva. You are a great writer, keep writing!