awwwww...this is beyond cute...and funny! n_n

Awww... Cute :3 i wish this was a full story but i guess its a oneshot right? If not then please add another chapter! It cant end their! _ i will sign up for alerts just incase! :) nice job with it! Its very good

wtf sciene when has american tv use gay as an insult

what are they whatching famliy guy 9 hours a day

btw a freaking polish ice cream man! WTS

Very nice story!

I don't usually go for stories set far in the future, but the summary got me - Kaoru having run off with the polish ice-cream guy is a hilarious start. I liked the rest of it too (especially "hah hah, die fourth wall die!"), it all made sense despite being quite far from canon reality.

But please check your spelling/grammar more thoroughly. Since nothing else was wrong with the story, it was unfortunate that a few missing commas made it a bit hard to read at times.

this is too cute

please, please, PLEASE tell me this isn't a oneshot! it's too good to leave me hanging...

Kawaiii~! *fangirl squeal*

and LOL at the Polish Ice cream man part :D

Very good story. a little sad that Tamaki would run off but i can see that as a possibility. I do like how you portrayed the little boy. And that little talk was sweet.

*Squigglesqueal* 8D8D8D

That was so cute~! X3 Uwahhh~~~

I loved how motherly Haruhi was and Hikaru's little talk with Jamie at the end - so sweet. :3 And Hikaru coming round for tea everyday was totally cute :3 :3 :3

And Kaoru - ah, Kaoru. He was just hilarious through the whole story xD The phone calls and his line about how we DON'T want to know where that ice cream's been... brilliant xD

Thank you so much! :D An extremely adorable story. I'm not sure how long it'll take until I get yours up, but it shouldn't be too long. My brain works very slowly xD

Many kudos~~

~Mimi x

AWWWWWWWWW!

that's so sweet!

I'm usually not a HikaHaru fan bu this was a really good story!

that was kawaii! well...the hikaharu was anyways. the kaoruxpolish dude was not. nothing against homosexualitiy!

That was adorable! and Jamie is such a cute name!

AWWWWWWHHHHHH! KAWAIIIIII!

This was fantastic! :] I think Hikaru is cute, but I am still a strong TAMAKI supporter so cute though!

xD

-san.x

Polish ice cream man?