Yay! You're back!

I liked the tone of this story. You can feel that the gang is older, but they still have that spark in them.

I liked the ending. D It was always the chase that Lupin loved the best.

I hope you are able to write more, soon!

Guess what... I actually loved this... It was great 3 You have improved so much! 3 Awesome! Nothing bad to say about this one.

I like this very much! Good job!