It has always been hard for me to play crisis core since I knew Zack would die at the end. Having this written in Cloud’s perspective is heart breaking. He is so out of it yet tries so hard.

a very good oneshot for clouds time poisend

Aww! T.T Poor Zack... no wait! Poor Cloud! I really wish the game had ended better. They let you fall in love with Zack then they rip him from you! They are just cruel mean people. XP

Awwh...

I just finished watching Crisis Core not but... well, just a few minutes ago. This fic is brilliant!

...Poor Cloud /3

I was crying at the end of this, but I do admit that I giggled when Cloud said "It's a dumbapple."

:] Keep writing!

*sobbing hysterically*

No! I hate those scenes! ZACK, COME BACK! PLEASE!

Sorry.

It moved me. :P

Good job. XD

I like it. I love it. Do you think there might be some more to it? Possibly, in the future? Maybe? :p

I'm a sucker for Cloud fics, what can I say?

I do absolutely love this. Zack's final scene, although it makes me cry like loads and loads, is probably one of the most beautiful scenes in a game i have ever witnessed, and doing it from the point of view of cloud who is helpless until it is to late is awesome. Very well worded as well. Well done! :D