You wrote the fight scene pretty well. I can actually see Shinji doing something like that:-)

OKUDA! :D

hey, i just realized that you improved throughout the chapters! now you own the machine you're typing the story on! :D

holy shit, this story is killing me (to be precise me and my non water-proof mascara x'P)

after reading this chapter i finally understand why this story seems kinda 'strange' to me.. the reason is the author - just Germans are able to write such crazy (and unbelievable funny) stuff xDDD

omg

*attempts to say something while laughing and fails*

Short, simply and utterly hilarious. I like you xD

Will there be more chapters? Having a collection of stupid, silly shorts like this would be aweseome.