| Reviews for Malice |
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  benjamin chapter 7 . 2/5 continualo esta genial e increible y tiene lo que casi ningún fanfic naruto tiene una hinata con espinas y poder para respaldarlo, el que sean uno lo hace genial por favor no lo abandones esta genial. |
 Kingkong101 chapter 1 . 6/27/2019 This sucks |
| koseta.a chapter 4 . 5/18/2019 This story I'd a little confusing I thought it was centered on Naruto not hinata |
| Earthly Entity chapter 7 . 4/15/2019 Pls update I want more sempai |
| SpartanPrime101 chapter 2 . 11/30/2018 Well...this chapter certainly made me want to kill myself. Sorry, but this story is NOT my cup of tea. |
| Visitor chapter 7 . 11/1/2018 What ur plan with this story after the venom movie? Gonna have narutos head pop out her shoulder like in the movie. Catch projectials with a net of goop? |
| PikaMew1288 chapter 7 . 10/13/2018 Actually the second that she was banished from the Clan should had full right to get the seal on her removed and Hyuga clan has zero say in the matter, especially now that she is a ninja meaning that she serves the Hokage and he can order the seal removed if he believed that it was a hindrance to one of his soldiers which it is. Considering the ease at which the Kumo ninja broke in and kidnapped a child, stealing blueprints for the seal should be a cakewalk. |
| spanky1988.ajw chapter 7 . 10/7/2018 Can't wait for chapter 8! |
| Dragonbornlycan chapter 7 . 10/6/2018 I like this new story but I have one request, please don't have Tsunade be absorbed if you give Naruto and Hinata that ability again, she is Naruto's cousin and godmother. Sorry if this is rude request but it was odd to see that in venom kunochi. |
| 174782turoq chapter 6 . 9/13/2018 please don't quit on this story |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/28/2018 You do seem to have your main character want to spend a WHOLE LOT OF TIME in front of mirrors! Narcissistic MUCH? Frankly it gets a LITTLE DULL, ("quick, this one is easy to defeat! Just show a MIRROR to her and she'll FREEZE FOR AT LEAST 5 MINUTES, ADMIRING HERSELF!") And you think ino and the others are SHALLOW about how they act? Then how about your main character? The outfit, wanting to talk/think about how she looks ALL THE TIME, HOW SHOULD ANY OF THAT MATTER? You not ACTUALLY "elevating" her, your making her as EMPTY HEADED as them! Instead of dressing non-noticeably and not speaking because she's shy, she SHOULD be like that because NINJA AREN'T SUPPOSED TO STAND OUT! I mean here she "shouting accusations" constantly looking in mirrors, doing fashion tips AND talking about boys... SOMEHOW NONE of this says "getting stronger" to me.. It's all VERY HYPOCRITICAL. |
| Lord-Chrono chapter 7 . 6/27/2018 Awesome, Go Hinata! |
| 174782turoq chapter 4 . 4/2/2018 I challenge someone to try it |
| 174782turoq chapter 4 . 4/2/2018 just had an idea; similar storyline except naruto's the outsider, and give hinata the outsider's mark and occumpaning powers. (dishonored series) |
| 174782turoq chapter 7 . 4/1/2018 more |
