More please!

Sorry I said nice things. People who don’t finish their stories don’t deserve reviews.

8 years too late but wow this is an amazing story. Thoroughly enjoyed what I read! Thank you for posting :)

What a shame this is unfinished

*Rustily attempts to translate Italian with yr 9 text book.*
When you spin my food, is this thing precious? I'm the circle?
*... wait no. That's not it*
I will give you all of me all myself.
*Hmm... Might as well google this.* *Oh. That makes more sense.*

How old is Sarah?

Waaaah! This is a great story! Looking forward to more :)

Aww, I knew it wasn't finished but that doesn't help the disappointment when there's no Next button. For what it's worth, I think this is super cute and your Jareth is perfect. Will you update if someone says the "right words"? :-)

its sad when you reach the end of the last chapter of a story you are really enjoying and... tho the story isnt ended... and

I'm sorry to see that you haven't updated recently - this is a really fun story!

I knew before I started reading this that it was unfinished and had not been touched in years. But man, oh man, I kinda wish I hadn't. I love this story so far and you ended on a cliffy :( Your Jareth is perfection. I also really enjoy the way you wrote Sarah and her friends. I can hear their voices perfectly when reading their dialogue. The plot is also wonderful. I like the premise... one I haven't read in any other fanfics. I hope that one day you might grace us with an update and maybe finish up the story? Please ;)

NOOO! Why did you never finish this? It's amazing! And very like my GSUV, now I come to think of it - just a cutesy, more-or-less plotless romance. Adorable. I'd love to see more one day. :)

Haven't checked out the reviews for this, so I may not be the first, but yeah I think that Italian doesn't say what you think it says :P a rough translation of that would be: 'How much my world turns/how much it turns my world, it is a precious thing. I would give you everything if only you permits me...' So close and yet so far :P

More? Pretty please? :)

And you left this unfinished. ...your evil...just evil