Wow. I'm really crying. this is even more emotional when I think about how I would feel if I lost my other half, my twin brother. You are a great author. The writing was beautiful!

This is so touching!

Every single time I read about Fred's death I have to cry. It's not fair! Why him? Why Fred?

Good work!

Greetings :)

An interesting idea, really, and a great add-on to cannon. This was really great! Awesome job! I was really able to imagine the scene where George was approaching his family at the end. Wow, keep up the good work!

This is definitely one of the best Fred/George stories I've encountered so far. It's so sad that I have tears in my eyes. I really, really loved it.

I'm crying. So hard. TT_TT

This is an amazing story with so much detail it made me cry, thank you 4 writing it

My eyes water just thinking about Fred dying...but now I'm crying like big, big, fat...crybaby.

POOR FREDDIE! :(

Still...this was awesome...and sad. :)

I can't even reply because I'm crying like a huge baby. D':

Poor George!

Extremely well written, though.

OMG! now you've done you made me cry!damn it I am so gonna need summat to dry my eyes with in the next muvi! I think when fred dies in the muvi everyone and I mean EVERYONE will come out of the cinema crying! you captured the twins relationship really really well Bravo!

Omg! Why do you try to make me cry you mean mean person :P I reckon you captured the essence of the twins perfectly.

11am

xx :D

How very sad.