Lovely chapter. You've written a wonderful, well-detailed story that keeps the readers wanting more. Hint hint. I cannot wait till your next story.

Love it such a great ending with Angus and his daugther standing on the window, watching out into the little wonder land

Awesome chapter. I cannot wait for more!

love that chapter... Deirdre and Ivar are a good team when it comes to steal, that scene really makes me smile because i loved that scene in the serie as well... also glad to see that we will write wnother story

Maeve never stops. Sad chapter and anxious for the next chapter.

wow what a fight…Aideens deaths shocked me honestly, but maybe because she is the main character in my Story. Hopfully Garrett will make it and they can defeat Maeve. She scares me... good job

Wonderful chapter with great a great flow of the battle. You love your cliffhangers, don't you? Keeps us readers in anticipation for the next chapter.

Too bad about Rohan and Deirdre not having more time alone. I hope Kells is prepared enough for the battle ahead, which you showed them getting ready throughout the story.

omg, an epic battle is going to happen. can't wait for the next chapter

so good., love the little scene with Angus and his list… i would really like to know, what Deirdre has told himand and i really like the idea of Angus becoming dad and husband. Also can't wait to see what happens now, that Meave has joined the party

Good things happening and I was so excited. Of course, you threw in that unexpected twist at the end. You are so good at that.

Amusing bachelor party as well as when the ladies were helping Deirdre getting dressed. About time Deirdre and Rohan are married.

Garrett is getting better, but he will always be arrogant. Cathbad and Angus are funny.

So good! Action with nerve-racking concern for the good guys.

Oh, I should have seen that coming! Excellant detail that pulled me into that cave.