Reviews for Hostage
cosette141 chapter 2 . 1/22/2018
WHAT?! Man! Please finish this! I just got so good!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/24/2015
Please continue!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/19/2015
I love this little story and I hope that one day I see it continued. Still, until then, excellent work!
Tacodestroyeravenger chapter 2 . 6/8/2014
I don't understand. Why was he off? Why'd he go down so easily? How are they to escape? Is he blind now? How will they get out? I NEED TO KNOW!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/13/2014
pleasepleasepleaseplease update, this is such a suspenseful cliffhanger to leave us off at, so tantalizing! please update!
LisaG16 chapter 2 . 8/10/2012
oh my! how could you not finish this?! please continue!
Arianna18 chapter 2 . 4/11/2012
Soooo ... I'm guessing this story has been abandoned? Too bad because it's pretty good. Sure hope the author is okay.
WaterDragonQueen1 chapter 2 . 2/4/2012
more please...eliot cant stay blinded!
ardnaseel chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
This was off to such an interesting and promising start, I hope you haven't forgetten about it!
TheNaggingCube chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
seriously you must come back to this story.

was E shot in the head?
Chocochino11 chapter 2 . 9/7/2010
please update soon D
Serenity Starke chapter 2 . 7/28/2010
Whoa! Love it. The first chapter was a little confusing at the beginning but other than that it flowed well. I like the ending of chapter 2, I hope you won't keep us waiting long for more of the story. I also hope that you will offer some explanation as to why Eliot wasn't fighting as "well" as the team expected. Why wasn't he fighting as flawlessly as he normally did? Looking forward to more.
Astellya chapter 2 . 7/28/2010
ooo, awesome chapter. I can't wait to read more!
TealMoose chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
Eeep! Elliot!

Update soon!
StarlightNinjaThief chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
oh no poor eliot! im a eliot/parker fan but i like how you're writing this. hes hardly ever injured
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