Not bad, just a little awkwardly paced. Too fast, it made it look weird.

Sakura's a slut in this. Here's the idea...

Sakura breaks off her engagement, runs immediately over to Naruto's house and begs him to bang her as he professes his undying love. The end

What a lame relationship that is! I feel sorry for all the characters in this tragedy of a story.

jsm

It was good, I really liked it please keep making more!:-)

It was great but I think that the realtionship picked up too fast. Take some more time on Sakura's emotion and a little ore on Naruto's confession. Still a great story!

Should have make it so tat sasuke a few days later realized tat he really loves sakura and tat ino was just a fling and then make him suffer as he sees sakura in the arms of a another (SMEXXY) man

it would have been cool to have a little mini-after about Sasuke regretting but anyways I liked it a lot. It was sweet!

This just was way too choppy and confusing. She says she doesnt want to have a man that uses her for sex anymore, but then shes a virgin?

I LOVE THIS! ITS SO CUTE! AND SASUKE AND INO ARE BACKSTABBING SON OF A BITCHES!

umm, this is way to weird. Sorry but c'mon, she goes for Naruto JUST because sasuke cheated? What if he didn't cheat or what if she never found out? She wouldn't have even thought of Naruto. He's just second place to her in this and i'm tired of reading fics where Naruto isn't her first choice or where she just goes to him cause she needs comfort only to dump him or be confused about her feelings later on. Geez people! You gotta realize that Naruto is clearly the better man! I would kill for someone like Naruto. sasuke sucks, he;s such and emotionally constipated, evil, emo bastard.

A decent story, but Naruto comes off as pretty pathetic. I mean Naruto is nothing more than a the consolation prize or silver meadal to Sakura. Because if she doesn't catch her Grand prize or Gold medal cheating on her, they never would have gotten together and she wouldn't have given Naruto a second thought while she went off and married Sasuke.

You've got a nice story here, the thing that I see that needs to be fixed is that you have to seperate the dialogues, because it gets a bit confusing.

Well, I'll be looking for more of your stories :)

PEACE!

-FOXSAGE-

Yay first reviewer! I think. Sasukes' and ass! Ino's just a pig. You should make a sequel please please please!

Kudos,

-Gothic-Porcelain-