It's really good please write more

Aw! This was so adorable! Wonderful job!
With love,
Lunatic Yaoi Fangirl666

I liked it :D just so cute

This is incredibly sweet. Perfect fluff. I used to have daydreams about meeting a guy/my crush like this.

Good job really nice and fluffy. But just so you know thunder is the sound of lightening and light travels faster than sound so thunder will come after lightening or if it's really close sometimes it sounds like the same time. If you heard it come before that's probably from a different lightening strike. That's why you can count the distance of a lightening strike by counting the beats between the lightening and the thunder! If it's more than a couple counts then the lightening is far but if its one or none then the lightening is right around you! I think Freddie is pretty smart so he would know that about lightening if it was Sam or Carly POV then they might not know that, but Freddie should! Did you know that lightening can travel up to six miles so it doesn't even have to be cloud and you can be struck by lightening that happened to this cyclist in the mountains the lightening storm was on the other side of the mountain so it didn't look cloudy at all but he was struck by lightening. People are natural conductors because we have so much water in us that we attract lightening. Usually you can tell if you might be struck if you're hair starts sticking up and you hear ringing in your ears!

hahah luv it, goood jobb

Wow! That was very interesting! I think I have a crush on this fic!~3

More Griffin/Freddie! XD

This was really job!

so cute!

please make a sequel!

really good but u should make another chapter where they have sex but make it long and horny

This is a cute story please keep it up...

This was really cute! I love the Freddie/Griffin pair! I'm actually thinking of writing this pair too! Loved it, hope you keep it up!

Very cute dude and as always your writing is awesome and rocks!

Dalton _