sorry, I mean incredibly amazing :D

this story is incredibelly amazing! You should write more about this

I LOVE it! It's so awesome, and sweet, and romantic, and cute...

Just check the spelling.

.SPEECHLESS.

honestly, Veronika...i LOVE this story 3

you know i think you are extremely talented, and you will be a great writer- greater than you already are

your writing has improved SO much since the first story! i am SO happy this story won that award! i loved, loved, LOVED it! it was funny, romantic, and...it left me speechless :)

This is one hell of a shot. I LOVE IT!

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'illigal, under aged, gay elfs singing' was my favorite line! it was funny because i HATE justin beiber with a PASSION but no offence to any one who likes the under aged elf's singing... any ways great story longest one shot i ever read.

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this is amazing, you should email it to stephanie meyer it is soo gooooood, i love the ending the beginnning and the middle, it is truly amazing, i dont know how you do it!

great story!

Nice Story - My fav bit was the "game night" bit, you could have just written a story about the cullens playing monopoly, would have made me laugh - as it did.

Very sweet story. I am glad you gave Renesmee and Jacob an ending or really a beginning to the end.

Darn those vamps for having all those "gifts" to be able to not give anyone their privacy. I am glad they did give in and show up for the wedding. Wonder what would be next in their long lives. Hmmm...

...WOW.

That was amazzing :O

Awww! I loved it.:)..it was so sweet..

no longer a loner! so sweet! nice plot.:D

ohmygosh!, this is so so so amazing , i looved it , it was also a little funny , it is a really good long one-shot and i hope you write more jacob and nessie stories :)