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Excellent story

Wait... Isn't Evangeline the most powerful in Mahora? And if it isn't, wouldn't it be Konoemon?

Nice story, and I'm kind of surprised. I never thought I would see another Nanoha/GK story besides the one I made (and deleted). Anyway good job, there is always room for more Gate Keepers.

I'm liking your new 'shared universe' here. Keep it up!

Very nice work hope to see more in we need more Gatekeepers stuff.

Neat. I have to wonder what would happen if an invader tried to possess Sailor Moon. *evil smirk* If she purifies an invader do they revert back to human? I want to see more of this. Not enough Gatekeepers stuff out there.

Konoe Konoka. Konoe Kaoru.

Didn't you use the same logic to keep Haruna and Ranma unrelated?

And while I'm at it, some stuff I was saving for the next 2814 update.

I have to wonder. Is it really worth it to upgrade Fate-chan from Loli-Deathscythe-Custom-Kai (Endless Waltz) to Loli-Deathscythe-Custom-Kai-Lantern? Is she not powerful and badass enough as it is?

Another thing I was wondering: Do you think the Twin Card can duplicate other Card's abilities? Like duplicating Fly so Syaoran can give Sakura some extra air support, or duplicating sword because it would be awesome?

F.Y.I. above the odd collection of gasps and pants in the middle of my review on Uzumaki Harry was 1000 characters of me winding down my explosive laughter. It was the longest laugh I have ever dictated in a review.

Keep upthe great work.

If you're looking for last name similarities for crossovers, remember that Fate shares a surname with the Captain of the Tuatha de Danaan (Teletha 'Tessa' Tesstarossa or Full Metal Panic), and Ginja and Subaru share a surname with a motorcycle cop (Ken Nakajima of You're Under Arrest) and a deceased Paper Master (Donny Nakajima of Read Or Die).