Reviews for At Her Majesty's Request
williamsfc18 chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
please update, great storyline
Dragonjek chapter 8 . 6/8/2016
There's something of a problem with the whole "sacrifice" thing.

Sending sacrifices is rare enough that it hasn't happened in Naruto's lifetime. But everything you've said so far implies that Ino kills them pretty much right away. Twice already we've seen humans that her demons have captured-and it seems (from the first one) that she does try to keep them around for extended torture. Why does she kill sacrifices quickly? How does one sacrifice tide her bloodthirst over for a dozen years? What's different about the sacrifices as compared to the other people?

You've called Minato one of the sacrifices; at other times, though, you said that he went off to kill her. Why would Ino have said that she was always satisfied with the sacrifices? Why did the age of Naruto matter (when Kiba & co. were talking after picking him up). If she kills the sacrifices right away, how could she possibly have considered Minato as potential mate material?

I've noticed that you haven't really discussed Kushina. And Naruto still has his whisker marks... I'm guessing that Naruto might not be fully human... he never mentioned his family name. I wonder if the name "Uzumaki" holds any significance to Ino.

I'm having a hard time seeing how this could grow into NaruIno. The only redemptive features Ino's shown so far is a certain level of affection for Kiba, but even that's riddled with cruelty. She doesn't even have a reason for murdering and torturing people, other than because it amuses her. Other than physical beauty, there's nothing for Naruto to be attracted to.

Naruto managed to wound Kiba pretty easily when they met. Are Inuzuka just not very impressive demons, or was he just not trying?
Guest chapter 8 . 2/20/2015
Awesome! Plz update!
Tiger chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
Bro really waiting for ur next chapter
Queen of the Snow-Wolf chapter 8 . 7/8/2014
would you please think about continuing this story its very good its something i have never read before i think it is an awesome story and would like to see it finished or if it is finished then making a sequel or somthing like it but i really enjoyed it and if you do continue it you didn't speak of Kushina in any way so maybe you could make Naruto half demon from the kyuubi
Tiger chapter 8 . 6/11/2014
Bro waiting for ur new chapter eagrly...
ace chapter 8 . 2/23/2014
Wow sorry I took so to read this but I love it and I hope that chapters are as good as the previous one in other words I like year fic men keep it up
Hey gut facts chapter 8 . 7/19/2013
Man, that ending was so AWESOME, holy shit. Good job dude
ass chapter 8 . 7/11/2013
garbage
korosu chapter 8 . 11/1/2012
you have to continue this, I love it, it's great
Guest chapter 8 . 9/14/2012
Update soon plz
James chapter 8 . 8/7/2012
Please continue this story it's Fu**ing awesome!
Keiron chapter 8 . 7/30/2012
Please continue this story I'm hooked:)
Shadow.00.Exia chapter 8 . 6/21/2012
Whens the next chapter coming out man. I'm starting to get hooked on this story.
SHADOW DRAGON TWISTER chapter 8 . 1/3/2012
Awesome chapter I can't wait for chapter 9 I bet it will be more awesome than this one
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