Reviews for Suspicions |
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WolfOfLightning chapter 4 . 1/24/2013 AWWW! Cute chapter, loved the fact that Beast Boy was beating his head against the wall and couch too! XD |
Superherofan chapter 2 . 1/4/2011 So far, I'm intrigued and entertained. There is one big thing you need to do to make this better; Every time a different character talks, make it a new paragraph. It makes it easier to read and increases the story's flow. You seem to have some good ideas here, but you need to do this basic thing and it'll be ten times better. Even if it's just Nova doing the mind speak, it needs it's own paragraph. if there is an non-speaking interruption and the same character is going to talk after, you can keep it all one paragraph. Other than this, I'm enjoying it so far and will keep reading! Good luck to you! |
Luiz4200 chapter 4 . 8/14/2010 Good chapter. |
Luiz4200 chapter 3 . 7/23/2010 Cool. I recall an episode of these Robot Monkeys where the Earth is involved. Is this fic placed before or after that? |
Luiz4200 chapter 2 . 7/19/2010 Nice chapter. |
Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 7/15/2010 Good story. Is Danny Phantom the only series to cross with Teen Titans here? |