awesome update! loved that Jess shot Burke!

Woo hoo! Oh yeah, Jess kicked some ass!

Tell ur dad thanks for giving me da idea. Boiling oil would be more painful. LOL. Well thanks for finally ending da story. Don't get me wrong I totally loved it da whole way but I have enough cliffies to last me a lifetime Thank You Very Much. Totally agree wid you Jess kicked ass. Ending was abrupt but alrite. Great story.

Yeah Jess kicks ass! A great ending! Now u could put down the vest & helmet lol

great update! I think we all know who will be killed

YEAH? Alright then i'll bring a chainsaw next time! :P Amazing chapter but you better update soon otherwise it'll end badly for you :D

MontanaAngell's pitchfork may not work any more, but how about a steamroller? Your kevlar and helmet wont' stand a chance. That'll teach ya a lesson on leaving us with a cliffhanger!

Gotta thank Montana Angell but she's not the only one to fear. I'm making a boiling pot of water. Take this scenario. You hanging upside down over a boiling pot of stew and me laughing and poking you with a stick. Funny but nyways if you don't have Don save Jess it might just happen.

So u already have a vest & helmet now. U'd better start to run off now! Lol.

Come on Don! Quickly Jess needs u now.

Update soon!

oh wow

Oh, girl... yes you'd better run, and run fast. How could you leave us a cliffhanger like that?

Grrr i'll be after you with a pitch fork if you don't update soon :P

Start running and don't look back! Good chapter but seriously ur in trouble. If Jess gets taken by Burke again I am having a stroke. LOL.

A cliffie? I think u should put a vest on and a helmet too lol. U must update soon. Leaving us with a cliffie is not a good thing. What happens to Jess? Don & the team must find her soon. Ok don't hurt her again. I've read many stories with Jess got hurt in them. Poor Jess! If Jess got hurt Don would feel the pain too. Ok I stop rambling now lol.

Update soon ok!

Can't wait for next chapter.