Honestly I know some people think secret underground organizations that manipulate how the world works are cool but they really aren’t

J.K. Never really cared about her math and the wizarding culture is different from ours

A very interesting read, full of fresh ideas. I hope someday there is more.

I like your writing, and your imagination is astounding! Unfortunately I've decided not to finish reading this story. It's the pureblood aspect to the story; I find it distasteful in the extreme. It's too similar to my real life experiences with classism and racism for me to read this without any bias. To read your version of Harry with this attitude is difficult for me to stomach. Regardless, you are a fine writer and I hope you continue writing fiction.

i hope one day you return to this story

Omg I love this story!

This hasn't been updated in years but the summary sounded amazing so I had to give it a chance. As I read each chapter I fell more and more in love with how you write Harry and everyoine else. I love how creepy Dumbledore comes off and how awesome all the blacks and everyone else is.

AAND, Firecrackeris Ronald

So far, I have deduced that Bee is Dumbles, Obsidian is Snape, Emerald is Harry and Aquamarine is Neville.

Do you think you will complete this story at some point. I do hope that you would plan for a fitting end to old Voldy - he should be seen as corrupting magic - torturing pure bloods and killing them when they opposed him. Hope to see an update. Great story. Love intelligent Harry stories.

this is a really good story so far so well done. Just saying at the end of chptr 8 prof snape was surplrised at harry apologising but he really thanked him , not apollogised to him. Other than that well done.

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Hi Seven Malfoy,

I don't think you're wrong about the fact that Pollux and Irma Black had Walburga when Pollux was thirteen, or at least not the only author to say that. Elvendork Nigellus, who wrote the fanfiction "Growing Up Black", also wrote in his/her fanfiction that Pollux and Irma had Walburga at thirteen. (Sorry Elvendork Nigellus!)

It's probably a little late anyway but I'm new to fanfiction. Hope it helped, even if I'm late, and that you're still writing!

Shadow of the Blue Moon

Found this yesterday and love it. I do hope your muse comes back and you can update soon

A few typos were overlooked:

faun - fawn

rights - rites

the turned - they turned