You have done a wonderful job of writing this story. I have read a couple of stories till now on the imprint between this particular pair and I believe that you have dealt with it a lot more realistically. I liked that both had to go through their grief and still work to find a way to be together. Even the reactions of all the other characters seemed more realistic. All in all a good job.

Absolutely loved it, thisI is the second time. I'm reasing this,, I think I read it in 2012 and I loved it just as much and the end still had me in tears

Wow. Just. Wow. What an absolutely amazing story I love a good jakeward/Edcob story, and this one just shot right up my list of favourites! Thank you for such a lovely read!

I loved this!

This was honestly amazing. Thank you so much for creating a realistic and gripping story about these two. There aren't enough stories about this couple that are realistic and not Bella bashing. This had a great plotline that wasn't just the whole "Jacob imprints on Edward" troup, yours had much more depth and things going on. You brought out the best in all of these characters, such as Edward's humour all the way down to the way the pack handled such a situation. Not to mention that Sarah was adorable! I love her little addition, it didn't offset the story like usual OC's tend to do. The way she played with Edward had me laughing so much! It was just fantastic the way you had me imagining it. I'm always hesitant when it comes to the angst genre, because I've read many a story where the angst is just so overwhelming and it's tragedy after tragedy. So, when I read this I was extremely relieved and surprised that while it had its fair share of angst, you also had comedy relief and didn't always focus solely on the angst. The problems made sense and they were thought out. Everything tied together. Bella's death even struck me as entirely possible. The fact that she fell, tripping instead of being killed by any of the supernatural beings around her. It seemed, very fitting, sad but fitting for her to die in a very human way, you could say. At least that's how I felt. Once again I must thank you for the story and how wonderful it was to read it.

Loved it!

okay, confession time... when i first started reading, i thought this was the same (in)famous My Immortal fanfic (coz i couldn't rememer if it was HP-fandom or Twilight)...but this was so beautiful and amazing, especially their characters, that I had to google My Immortal ff and turns out it IS HP-fandom...

so, anyways, thanks for the very pleasant surprise, and an amazing read.

I cannot believe I spent half of the saturday reading this amazing story - I'm not regretting any minute of it!
You can sense how much effort and love you put into this work and I'm thankful that you decided to share the story with us :)
I fell in love with Jacob and Edward all over again and I'm looking forward to reading some of your other work - maybe someday you upload another Jakeward story? I'd be happy to read it!

Even though you finished this story, and this is a pretty old story, there is a part in the book that says wolves don't experience pain, instead it is poison to them, so technically, Jacob should be dead. Edward should know this, as he told Bella this in Breaking Dawn.
(Correct me if I am wrong, thanks)

I adore the fact that you put imput in the hearing abilities of the Cullens. I mean, when they're scenes like this is the only thing I can think.

Awwww this is soo sweet! All Jakewards fics are always sexual and not so much sweet and pure like this one, and when they try it's just soo forced, but this one is soo.. refreshing!

Leah is a fangirl! Hahahahaha well at least that's not a problem.

I love it. You're really good with Jakeward. So far everything I have read of them always rushes things. One moment they are in love with the same woman the next with each other and all because of the imprint. But I like how you manage the situation, I mean, just because Edward is Jake's imprint it doesn't meam that romantic feelings will develop immediately, especially when Jake will only be what Edward wants and needs. Every other Jakeward fics just IGNORES this like it doesn't matter and immediately puts them in a romantic relationship. But here you can actually see how their relationship builts, which I love!

So she was depressed? Post partum depression maybe? And they were always fighting because Bella was afraid that Jacob might imprint and leave her and Jacob was afraid that Edward would appear (which is kind of ironic since Edward is Jake's imprint) and she died from a stupid accident... that's soo.. stupid and sad. I'm going to make a guess that Victoria tried to kill her amd that she creted an army of newborns or something and that's why Bella's death is more sad...

Really? She fell from a cliff? That's soo... lame. there's something you're not saying right?